Good flow and yeah I can see your emotion behind this but it seemed a bit short and try to use more vocab but other than that it's good.

Yeah this drop definitely gave that feeling of horrorcore. Also you had great multi's, your flow was amazing and your wordplay kept me interested in what would happen next. Nicely done.

Made this rap awhile back and have it posted on another site but wanted to see what people on here think about it.
Listen to this beat while reading http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s85S9wuqQiU&feature=player_embedded

Verse 1 (1:03)
I’ve been stuck in here with satan
Living in hell, but for YOU i ...