sTrapped into my Seatbelt

[PunINTENDED]

Made this rap awhile back and have it posted on another site but wanted to see what people on here think about it.
Listen to this beat while reading http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s85S9wuq ... r_embedded

Verse 1 (1:03)
I’ve been stuck in here with satan
Living in hell, but for YOU i’ll stay waitin
You won’t hear me complainin
Cause for YOU it'll all be worth it
I was stupid, in fact i was just an idiot
I was too reckless, you wanted to be safe but i was too dangerous
Always aiming to be BIG and also, Notorious
I always joked around and you were too serious
Rode my car like fast and furious
Passing red lights, had the best nights
But the wheel of fate changed and it turned right
Ironically nothing went right, a tragic occurred
An accident, the doctor said you couldn’t be cured
You got stuck in paralysis but i got heart disease
Sick to the heart, cause this tragic happened because of me
If only i had listened to you but now i’m filled with regret
Everyday i try to start new and forget
But it only gets me upset
Shit

So i just roam around with you in the hometown

Verse 2 (2:15)
I tried to open your heart but now it’s sealed off in a vault
You must hate me so much right now cause it was ALL my fault
I don’t need to read minds to know that you won’t forgive me
I still love you and i don’t need no body...
I’ll stick by your side like glue
Communicating is harder now like a mystery without a clue
But i’ll be the best detective for you
Better than sherlock
This mystery i WILL be sher to unlock
I will never give up
I will keep getting stronger and push up
Work my body till we’re in the same position
Aim at my goal with both accuracy and precision
When we are together we make the greatest fusion
We make magicians themselves look like illusions
Puzzle the crowds and create a mass confusion
Blast off to the stars and create a massive eruption
Any obstacle we face will go down in destruction
She may not have a body but our conjoined minds still function

So i just roam around with you in the hometown

[Faze]

I Liked The Story But It Lacks Complexity. & needs to be better worded.But its a Cool Story man