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this aint great quality cus my mic broke so i hadda use sumin else feed will be appreciated
try to look past the fact that it aint good quality

http://www.soundclick.com/player/single ... i&newref=1
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just takes me to the front page
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no no no
why the fuck are u rapping in an american accent?

quality and flow wise is was poor but everyones got to start somewhere so dont take that as a diss

but DO NOT keep this american accent crap going. be yourself
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wooah thats just how i rap that is my normal voice i didnt realise it was an american accent but i'll see what i can do dood
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
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Mutual? Whats Ya Username And The Name Of The Song? i Cant Play it For Some Reason it Brings Me To The First Page Also.
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shit i just decided i can be arsed with audio shit i'll just keep to written
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I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
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Miilz wrote:Mutual? Whats Ya Username And The Name Of The Song? i Cant Play it For Some Reason it Brings Me To The First Page Also.
yeah...wtf...how is dude able to hear it but not us...
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Hey, Just Keep On Recording Man. i Dont Know How Good u Are Because That Link Don't Work. im Still Waiting Also ..But Wouldnt u Like To Make Music? For When ur Older, Because i Heard u Was 12 No Hate Lol But For When ur Older, Like Ride in The Car With ur Own Music Playing? Or Rocking Some Party? ..Keep At it..There's Lots Of Stories Of People Who Quit They Audio's ..Because They Felt They Sucked ..Then Later Turned Out To Bein One Of The Best ..Similar To Eminems Story ..
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Lol i Dont Know Viral
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- Mutual Hostility - wrote:wooah thats just how i rap that is my normal voice i didnt realise it was an american accent but i'll see what i can do dood

i know thats how u would rap normally coz we only hear rap in american accents and it gets drummed into your head that rap should be done in a certain voice and certain phrases should be used. its just not credible when its obvious your putting a voice on subconciously or deliberatly. u should try and block it out and speak normally but then again if me or u were to rap like we speak it would sound wack to everyone coz their not used to our accent.

i dunno man do what u like. but as far as i see its a lose lose situation. thats why i dont do audio.
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Ay Mutual Imma checjk this out when I get home...and let you know what I think..
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... dID=903835

try checkin that out then Viral & Miilz

an miilz i'm 14 so ya know
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I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
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Post by HKX »

.... keep practicin homie u did good but I was expectin sum hott shit but 4 ur 1st tracks they was aight think it happens 2 everybody. Keep practicin improve ur on da mic and ur lyrics r aight but ur mic presence was not all da great but keep droppin nigga practice and practice homie
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Post by Viral »

ur lyrics r there..i can tell u that..atleast wat i could hear..cuz it sounded like u were whisperin..like everyone in ur crib was sleepin..or dey were in da other room and u didnt want them to hear u...lol...but otherwise..work on ur presence..and riding the beat more...cuz it was pretty off...keep doin u man..u can only get better....as long as u put ur all into and work hard
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Post by - Mutual - »

thnx fo the feed Viral
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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