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prepare to fight-to-death,right-to-left
ya scared so bite-the-meth,i hide-my-wreck
i got my violent-tech around my silent-steps
my hands is still around these tryants-neck
u all try to rattle-my-cage i aint scared i battle-for-days
cus u stand out black & white like cattle-that-graze
i'll just leave u differnt oranges like that'll-ablaze
like i haggle-my-stage but no-negotiations
i smoke-these-stations who think there hard revoke-vaccations
vaccinations no one can track-my-patience
like doctors i attack-so-blatent so u haters get back-to-hatin
try to-trap-disgracin emcees who dont react-when-facin
the greatest rapper hip hop will ever see
you'll never-be, clever-G i'm meant-to-be-cool
beat me dead i come back as another entity-fool
i was-sent-for-these-fakes make'em repent-what-they-take
goin so "fast" like-lent-come-in-late
my maze-of-ability thru my abbrasive-posterity
a daze-of-hostility wooah strange-ya-not-feelin-me
i am the only MUTUAL HOSTILITY
kill'n em all watch out now that i've lost-enemies

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feed is appreciated and will be returned
and this is off my first audio is the chamber
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by - Mutual - »

well feed would be appreciated
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by precise »

not to bad, the rhymes were allright but nothin really stood out to me, keep at it
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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Post by Arvincible »

nice, you kept to a nice rhymescheme and flow, this is by far the best ive seen from you man, u went from a 2 to a 5 outta ten imo. good shit and keep this mentality going, thats how i got fired up. good shit keep it up fam.
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