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HAHA JUST HAVING A LITTLE FUN, NOTHIN TO SERIOUS!


GET LOW Q
Check it, I'll rek it, cuz I'm DOIN IT BIG
Respect it, cuz is better, than YOU WOULD HAVE DID
Either way you can say, that I'm NEW AT THIS KID
But I'll Knock the fuck out ya like a LUDACRIS VID

TURN IT UP
They call me big Q, cuz I'm BEATING THE TOUGH
Got the most slugs, n I'm KEEPING DEM TUCKED
Q the type, to snipe, a dude INSIDE OF A CLUB
Fuck sipping drinks, have him only TASTING HIS BLOOD

GET LOW Q
Except it, ma record is SPEEDING UP QUICK
Seeing the cash, stash n SEEING THE BRICKS
You only looking brave like fake G's IN A PICK
Cuz cold and flu season only time that YOU SICK

TURN IT UP
So you screaming ya lyrics thinking know one could TELL
No one fearing you midget, that's it I'll see you in HELL
Sounding like them crunk rappers who only could YELL
but yah skill lack even worse than a Toddler can SPELL


GET LOW FAGGOTZ! :)



BloKKaHH! lol



jus having a lil Fun!
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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Post by - Mutual - »

this was pretty good
went to the beat well
not really original but
done well nice read
keep'em ocmin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by The Gonz »

Sick beat, would need to hear audio though. Better than 90% of any mainstream cat would drop on it.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

nice stuff.
Got the instrumental and flowed well to it.
Lyrics aint anything but special but was still pretty nice.
good job
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Lmao @ get low faggot
I bet arv can vibe to that.. lol jk
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Lol ...
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yah, just fuckzin wid ya'll!
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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Re: Touch it Remix

Post by complexity »

Quix wrote:HAHA JUST HAVING A LITTLE FUN, NOTHIN TO SERIOUS!


GET LOW Q
Check it, I'll rek it, cuz I'm DOIN IT BIG
Respect it, cuz is better, than YOU WOULD HAVE DID
Either way you can say, that I'm NEW AT THIS KID
But I'll Knock the fuck out ya like a LUDACRIS VID

TURN IT UP
They call me big Q, cuz I'm BEATING THE TOUGH
Got the most slugs, n I'm KEEPING DEM TUCKED
Q the type, to snipe, a dude INSIDE OF A CLUB
Fuck sipping drinks, have him only TASTING HIS BLOOD

GET LOW Q
Except it, ma record is SPEEDING UP QUICK
Seeing the cash, stash n SEEING THE BRICKS
You only looking brave like fake G's IN A PICK
Cuz cold and flu season only time that YOU SICK

TURN IT UP
So you screaming ya lyrics thinking know one could TELL
No one fearing you midget, that's it I'll see you in HELL
Sounding like them crunk rappers who only could YELL
but yah skill lack even worse than a Toddler can SPELL


GET LOW FAGGOTZ! :)



BloKKaHH! lol



jus having a lil Fun!
Its always good to have fun, but I wasn't entertained. By far the worst verse I have seen from you.
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