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-TraMaTiK-
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

beat provided by BTV Productions,hook done by Laydee Geey. im also buying the rights to this soon. anyways heres a little track i did about a month ago i just uploaded to my soundclick n was hopin to get some feed,heres the link

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7166056

click the link then click 'play hi fi' for those who might not kno. leave some feed ill return the favor please n thanks.
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Post by Viral »

id say one of ur better tracks...the beat...it was aight..lol..i cant say i was feelin it very much..hahaha...ur flow was straight...could use some work...and ur emotion n wat not...u seem a lil monotone at times...keep doin u..good to see u still bangin out tracks
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Post by - Mutual - »

man this hadda nice beat
the flow was done well to it
the chorus was pretty dope
with ya verse came a whole nice track
dude great stuff
keep'em comin
an i hope u return the feed
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

thanks so far yall,apperciate.

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