Insomnia Rhymin'

The Gonz · Post by **The Gonz** » Sat Dec 27, 2008 1:47 am

Some 4 in the morning shit...

I refuse defeat, biters come chew and eat/
You spittin Nyquil, puttin these dudes to sleep/
Got em out cold like you put roofies in lines/
These cats are Starburst, beneath the "rapper" they're fruity inside/
Newly designed, I stay ahead of the trends/
I couldn't be twice as dope if I said this again/
End up dead from a pen, I'm blessed with text/
Erase yer lines in one move like an Etch-A-Sketch/
Who's next to flex, all the vets know the deal/
Put the heat to ya twice like leftover meals/
Head over heels, I love rap, dude's speakin the truth/
I'm an internet "icon" like the blue E with the hoop/
No reason to shoot, I sleep through yer gun shots/
Any cats tryin to "Pop" me, I keep tubes of "son" block/
Chumps plot, if they gettin brave, I'll let the stainless spray/
Try to snatch my "carrots", wake up in a vegetative state/

Feed please.

Lotus · Post by **Lotus** » Sat Dec 27, 2008 2:22 am

you mad nice wit it... this shits full of creativity... solid through n through

that starburst shit lmao...

lol blowin up the cyphers too

Quix · Post by **Quix** » Sat Dec 27, 2008 2:33 am

shit came Hard! nice lil Rad Hommie!!

Flow was Illy, and some nice Content!

keep at it!

The Gonz · Post by **The Gonz** » Sat Dec 27, 2008 2:34 am

Lol thanks man, I was at work when I wrote that and had a bag of Starburst in front of me and thought I could make a punch using it.

Def-init · Post by **Def-init** » Sat Dec 27, 2008 4:08 am

"I refuse defeat, biters come chew and eat/
You spittin Nyquil, puttin these dudes to sleep/
Got em out cold like you put roofies in lines/
These cats are Starburst, beneath the "rapper" they're fruity inside/"

That was ill man. I like.. Nice punches!!

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Sat Dec 27, 2008 5:01 am

The Flow Was Good , I Liked How you were Messin With your Rhymescheme's
Alot Of Played Concepts & Weaker Punches , But Shows your Abilty To Jump In tHe Punchline Game... Your Set Up's could Be Better & Same With Wordin
Other Then That

This Was a Straight Piece

The Gonz · Post by **The Gonz** » Sat Dec 27, 2008 5:21 am

'Preciate the feed. I've been cyphering too long so of course my similies and punches have suffered from it. Always room for improvement.

EvilJoey · Post by **EvilJoey** » Sat Dec 27, 2008 9:44 am

How is this even Rap?

I mean u didnt say anything about Guns.. or bitches...

LOL...

I liked it tho ... few lines of fire for sure.

Go post another one ... Right Now!

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Haz · Post by **Haz** » Sat Dec 27, 2008 10:50 am

Guns Or Bitches?

Thats Played Out Rap Partna..
Get Ya Status Up

The Gonz · Post by **The Gonz** » Sat Dec 27, 2008 6:47 pm

He knows, he's just bein a sarcastic ass lol. More shit's on the way, Joe, you know that. Just been messin with the cypher shit since its more fun than actually writing a verse.

TreTru · Post by **TreTru** » Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:33 pm

haha dass ill..diss shit is hott to me cause it's rappable like 123..
slap this on an audio...

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I refuse defeat, biters come chew and eat/
You spittin Nyquil, puttin these dudes to sleep/
Got em out cold like you put roofies in lines/
These cats are Starburst, beneath the "rapper" they're fruity inside/

^^^^^^^^sumbody said it but this shit was dope ^^^^^^^^^^

Def-init · Post by **Def-init** » Sat Dec 27, 2008 9:46 pm

EvilJoey wrote:How is this even Rap?

I mean u didnt say anything about Guns.. or bitches...

LOL...

I liked it tho ... few lines of fire for sure.

Go post another one ... Right Now!

1

Listen here 50 cent... Go be fake else where rofl.
Gunz and Bitchz......ROFL
To quote Redman.
(The two things ur ass just dont get is Pussy and Respect!)

EvilJoey · Post by **EvilJoey** » Sun Dec 28, 2008 2:04 am

Wow...

Def-init Im Sorry... It was my fault for thinking most people have common scence

i assumed people would see the Sarcasim since i added a big LOL

it was a JOKE...

The Gonz · Post by **The Gonz** » Sun Dec 28, 2008 2:06 am

Refer to yer avatar lol.

ScottJames · Post by **ScottJames** » Sun Dec 28, 2008 5:22 pm

yeah bro..
i felt all them punches
they all hit hard n were creative as fuck..
way to stay consistent..

we shuld collab...get @ me inbox

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