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Still-Able - Syllable Madness

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Whats etched in the surface is a wordless, reflection of purpose
the conception is perfect, your left breathless from the excellent verses
the rest is worded assertive with discursive absurdness
dispersed with the sternness, discipline inserted in pureness
concerted with earnest service, emerges a wordsmith who converses
in curses, your nervous systems are worthless, he searches to hurt kids
purges his victims, causing surges with-in their skin, electrifying circuits
his urges come and burst quick, he's merciless,his verses are memorizing churches
cause testifying is exercising death defying worship, recognize a wordsmith
step inside, we will find who is next to die? I will rectify the verdict
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Syllable Madness Sounds Like The Name Of Some English Textbook For 5 Year Olds With Some Wacky Mascot On The Front Like 'Silly Syllable Mongoose' Who Randomly Appears Throughout Said Textbook With Dull, Unmongoosey Dialogue And No Genitals Drawn. That POOR FUCKING MONGOOSE THIS IS ALL UR FAULT U FUCKING STONER.
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wordplay went mad the flow was great
i liked it it was dope keep doin ya shit
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Cee4 »

wow. fuckin dope. a whole bunch of flawless multis but they were used well and nothing seemed forced. very very hard too especially over so many bars. props
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

another dope drop, ur concepts r beyong average thinking and ur word choice is nice, keep doin u man, wish ur ass did audio but i know ur still down on urself, i heard u make an attempt before n there's potential there, dont see y u dont perfect it tho and amaze us all
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

pure genius homie... love the whole piece not much i can say other than a great piece.. 9.1/10 could of been longer
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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damn.
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