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Cee4
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Post by Cee4 »

Off The Tizzop lol


Party time the booze will conquer now whos the monster
Sniff! C takes more 'blow to the nose' than a Jewish boxer!
Im the best on the site and i aint gotta pop off or front
Dudes only want the belt off me so they can hop on ma nuts!
Im somethin like a phenomenon, peasants just must dash
Beat Cee4? that's a 'bridge too far' like Jesodists moustache!
Fuck battles I want bitches, these kids aint playin me FACT
These girls faces 'quick to get stickied' like an AME track!
Cum on everyone, you know that I aint scared of failin
Who the daddy, 'al ask a bitch' like that milf Sarah Palin!
You know that im ballin but u cant pitch me or catch me
And if its a battle I “go for the catsâ€
Last edited by Cee4 on Tue Dec 30, 2008 12:35 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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Post by MagicMark »

woah, last 4 bars or so where heat lol..

sarah palin and ame tracks where hot.. flow was heavy.. nice multis

hot ish lol..

you fancy a freestyle / scriptures battle ???.. just for the craic..
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haha go for it i was gonna go back and add to this in a short while anyway lol. i just feel like doin some random shit right now
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Post by MagicMark »

fair eniz.. i'll set it up once we both check in.. it'll be like a 10 min deadline.... as many lines as you can get in those ten , can go for quality or quantity lol..
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^^^
lol
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Post by Borat »

This is pretty tight for a drunken freestyle.

you had some badass punches on hazard haha, dope shit.
you have some pretty ill rhyme schemes working throughout this peice.
keep drinkin!
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thanks

i`ll return the feed when i get the chance. same for u magic
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Post by ScottJames »

dude this whole thing was sick...

AME/stickied...was dope..
sissorhands was dope
jewish boxer

yeah, this was hor, i like the style u used too..
flows the best IMO///

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Post by Cee4 »

prizzops yes new year waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyy
upin for a mongo
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Post by Jesodist »

Basic shit nothing really special or new, but some nice multies, flow and punches throughout the entire verse. Not a total smooth flow caz some lines sounded forced and played out.
Nevertheless very creative and entertaining indeed i had fun reading it.
Good to know i am known atleast and special enough to be mentioned on a rap.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

for a drunken freestyle... damn
Lmao cee.
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Post by - Mutual - »

had a dope flow
nice punches
with some good multies
fo a keystyle dope
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Haz »

I Suggest you Get off My Dick Already ,
That should Be your new Year Resolution "Get Off of Hazards Dick".

Anyways The flow Was There A Bunch of Played Concepts,
A.M.E. thing was Cool


"moo slim" Was soooo Forced LMAO i've neva Seen Some1 Force Somethin So Bad.

Don't even get ya last line.

Anyways flow was Coo,
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Post by Cee4 »

damn hazard always talkin about "concepts" these days
anyway thanks anyways
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