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a Quick Verse i Wrote For The Faggot That Wouldn't Battle Me

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Ok, You "SLANDER-YOURSELF" ..Flawless? i'll Count Your Flaws On Two "HANDS-BY-MYSELF" ..//
And Still Come Up Short Like Your "FANS-AND-YOUR-WEALTH" ..//
Just Leave Your "TRACKS-ON-THE-SHELF" .. i Should "HARRASS-SOMEONE-ELSE" ..//
"RAPPIN-FOR-WEALTH", it's Either That Or Cuttin "GRASS-TILL-YOU-SWELT" ..//
1st Time i Saw ur Girl im Like Marilyn "MANSON'S-AN-ELF??" ..//
None Of Ya "TRACKS-HAVE-i-FELT", Talkin About Putting "GATS-TO-YOURSELF" ..//
This Ugly Anorexic Mexican Chad Kroeger "SILLY-FAGGOT" ..//
Thinks He's Gnna Be a Rapper, What?.. a Maraca Shakin "JIMMY-RABBIT?"
My "PROMINENT-FLOWS" "DEMOLISHING-THOSE" That Are Fake This Guy Callin Himself "Mac" His Real Name is "JONATHAN-THO" ..//
"DOMINO-KNOWS" This Dude is Not "HAPPY-WITH-HIS-LIFE", Go Find Your Fucking Dad Or Just "SLASH-iT-WITH-A-KNIFE" ..//
Could Be Ya Neck Or Leave Ya Veins "HANGIN-OUT-LIKE-A-SLEEVE" ..//
So "TRY-AND-SHOUT-BACK-AT-ME" .. i'll Knock "MAC-OUT-WITH-EASE" ..// (Mac_Out Msn Addy LoL)
Only Time Ya "Burnin-Beats" is When Ya "MARINADING-CHICKEN" ..// (Beetroot Marinadin)
Polar Bears Make "Hotter-Tracks" Than This "FAGGOT-THAT-iM-DISSIN" ..//
Shaky On The Mic, is That u Or The "CHEAPNESS-OF-iT" ..//
u Need To Think Of a New Name Cuz i See "WEAKNESS...FLAWLESS" ..//
Rappin About Suicide, What The Fuck "DO-iT?? ..//
Rappin For 3 Years And You're Still Yet To "PROVE-SHIT" ..//
This Guy Slits His "FOREAMS-FAR" Enough He's Settin Off "STORE-ALARMS" ..//
Put The Knife Away i'm Gnna Call u "BARCODE-ARMS" ..//
u Bastard Kid.. Aint Shit On Me On My "LEVEL-YOU-DISSED-BITCH" ..//
Call Me Wack All u Want at Least i Get "PRESENTS-FOR-CHRISTMAS" ..//
Soundin Shakier On The Mic Than "ALI-ON-A-TAGADA" ..// (Tagada = Thrill Ride That Bounces u Lol) ..//
Watchin Me..Blahh...Get Off...Stop Watchin..Watchers...Lmao

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I Hate When Folkz Think They Know Somethin But Have No Facts. lol. Looks Like We Got Another Lawgix. Stop E-Stalkin Me Domino. I Aint Even Beefin With You, So Hop Of My Shlong..mk pumpkin?
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Flaw sounds like that fruity teacher from Southpark "mmmmmkay".
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Lol, As Aposed To You Looking Like Him? bhahah
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I Hate When Folkz Think They Know Somethin But Have No Facts <---

i Seen What u And ur Gf Look Like And Heard About ur Childhood On Welfare u Dumb Fuck
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Post by complexity »

Past the beef there was some nice rhymes in there.

My "PROMINENT-FLOWS" "DEMOLISHING-THOSE" That Are Fake This Guy Callin Himself "Mac" His Real Name is "JONATHAN-THO" ..//
"DOMINO-KNOWS" This Dude is Not "HAPPY-WITH-HIS-LIFE", Go Find Your Fucking Dad Or Just "SLASH-iT-WITH-A-KNIFE" ..//

probably my favorite lines, i like how you told him to slash his life with a knife that was tricky
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Post by Kawnvikt »

Domino Had Some Good Flow, First Though I Appreciate The Fact That He Did It In A Respectful Manner, However if your just mad cuz someone didnt battle you aint no point in writing a battle verse anyway. Get what Im saying? As Complexity said those were your most complex rhymes in the whole flow so talkin bout your better than someone is not the way to go.
I Replaced Faith Where The Screws Tap Into The Bible I Was At The Recital They Asked Whos That In A Midst Of All This New Rap I Was Bangin Beats With Jesus Behind The Hay Stacks So Try To Stay Laid Back Cuz The Way I Face Rap Is Readin The Scripture Nobody Can Replace That
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Post by Kawnvikt »

BTW No Offense Meant In This One... LOL
I Replaced Faith Where The Screws Tap Into The Bible I Was At The Recital They Asked Whos That In A Midst Of All This New Rap I Was Bangin Beats With Jesus Behind The Hay Stacks So Try To Stay Laid Back Cuz The Way I Face Rap Is Readin The Scripture Nobody Can Replace That
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Post by Mac »

Word Was A Good Flow.. But...

"My "PROMINENT-FLOWS" "DEMOLISHING-THOSE" That Are Fake This Guy Callin Himself "Mac" His Real Name is "JONATHAN-THO" ..// "

Don't Get The Punchline..What My Name Gotta Do With Anything? lol
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