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this is one verse for this song ima record [its took a rock n roll type rap beat with guitars and drums and what not: kinda explaining the first couple lines]


with a rock n roll background, and a punk rock attitude,
i lash at you, maybe add a jazz track or two...
i laugh at fools, cause new aint what ur attracted to,
its irrational...FINE, ill have the DJ lay down a scratch for you...
watch....i got a track to spew,
i dont attack to lose, look, i got a track dispute...
cause you music you punks rock makes me laugh at you,
ima savage dude, ravage you with a tactical nuke...
compassion will lose, when i racket up clues,
give you a hint, next second, your gettin smacked with a tool...
im in a class thats new, nothing bland that will do,
the fact that you laugh at this ima put a gash in you...
im crass and rude, arrogant and actin an ass to,
math is your enemy, you'll get subtracted dude...
show gratitude for taking rap down new avenues,
damnit you, applaud and take out ya dancin shoes..


feed por favor.
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Post by complexity »

Going to be spitting that shit fast eh? nice job
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yeah its pretty fast paced when i spit it. appreciate it. short feed, but thanks.
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Post by Viral »

its good..def wanna hear it on audio
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Post by drunken jesus »

pretty nice, you repeated words a lil bit, the kool g rap type scheme was nice
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

yeah i liked it, it was ill, but its missin somethin for me, maybe i jus need to hear it audio
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by 8th »

appreciate the feed. It seems like their should be longer lines or something whenever i type it out. But to the beat its real fast past, and fits well. When ever i can get to the studio ill record and post.
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Post by Invincible »

Can't wait to hear it.
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Post by Mac »

Shit Was Crazy, I Agree With Them, I Wanna Here The Audio. Good Shit Man, Multies Bananas.
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Post by complexity »

yup
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