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Hollah Baq..

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http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7207698

FEEDDAGE LEave links and i'll return the favor..
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Post by Haz »

Lmfao!!!........

Yo I Had To Listen To It Twice to Keep Up With Ya Flow Real Quick
SHit was Bananaz.. "have more will power then hamster excercisin"

should i say it once more.. niggas now A Days are more hard headed then mount Rush More!!...

give you a Royal Flush lmao @ That Line, if it was Delivered how i Took it.


Overall , you Deff Was Showin ya Lyrical side In This Track , More Of a i'm Raw Bitch type Track...

Beat was Raw , Liked Tha Jay z Sample.. U Ran Well With it Fam...

Keep Droppin...

And leave feed to "Poor choices & right Back At Cha" In Tha Scriptures
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Post by Dynamiq »

alright no doubt my man i will do that in a bit.
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Post by K.O. »

def fresh mang...you came with that heat boyy!!ha thas wassup. def came off like a beast lyrically, delivery was on point, and i liked the effect you put on your vocals..the ad libs were smooth almost jeezy like ha the sample was straight n da piano was hot...HOLLA BACK!!!!!!!
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Post by Dynamiq »

thanks for the feed man.
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Post by K.O. »

np. respect dawg.
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Post by - Mutual - »

i heard this shit yesterday on ya sounclick i woulda gave feed earlier but i didnt realise u posted it on here til today well
it was straight lyrics sum dope punches as Haz pointed out it was good but not really my typa thing but shiit still a dope lyrical track
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Lawgix »

haha... yo this shit was ill... beat was fuckin siiiiick... lyrics were pure fire... n*ggaz are more hard headed like mount rushmore haha ill... good shit man for real... keep droppin homie... n like KO said... HOLLA BAYAKC!!!!
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Post by HKX »

sick shit dawg da whole track was sick dawg i could bump dis in da whip and run up on a nigga lol u snapped only problem is dat it was short dawg but fuck it its koo would like 2 see a full length of dis keep droppin nigga I ain't got n e links 4 u but yo if u wanna jump on da audio collab shit jump on it dawg holla at Kurse or me bout it so like ur track Hollah baq... lol
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Post by K.O. »

HOLLA MERCY!
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Post by Kurse »

not much else that I can add that everybody else hasn't already said or that i haven't already said to you in the past.
Good lyricals, good emotion and execution along with confident delivery...
...not really feelin the beat or the sample, too repetative..
...but still excellent mixtape material.
Keep doin you.
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