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MagicMarker - Couldn't be more CLEAR

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

just a quick response to ur 'We still Run This' diss drop,

MAGIC ain't on my level..sorry sir..NO TRICKS UP HERE!, so take 'battlin Smoke'...n add it to ya list of fears,
ya 'punches NOT VISIBLE', how bout a "SHOW of hands" just to make ya DISS-APPEAR,
ur last scripture really shown the worse rhymes u've spitten, HA! i laugh at all those forced lines of rhythm,
elementary...it looked like the first time u've written, and does it really take FOUR tries to "Get Um'..."??
u rip text? maybe when u split up ya words, cuz only time u 'get down to BUSINESS' is when u get up for work,
u seek attention kid...quick..pick up the search, the closest u'll ever get to "crossfire" is if i lit up ya church,
mark need self applaud? cuz puns not worth a flow n pace,u still hidden beneath ya idol... got no nerves to show ya face,
"We still Run This" ha u lack the VERBS to hold a race, yea i wear rags on my head..but u keep YOURS BELOW THE WAIST
lil wayne fan..we know that man is a biter, too frantic n hyper.. kid u fake as hell like manikin writers,
i wonder.. is magic a fighter? never.. u panic in fires, that's y u keep losing heat like vanishing lighters
mark's 'HAND I CAPPED' so how u manage a written?, u ain't rattlin shit..need more than a bandage to fix him,
faggot's stuck on AME like a spanish addiction, kid u can't START shit with KEYS like a damaged IGNITION
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Post by MagicMark »

lol.. this was good..

i can tell whats gonna happen already.. i wont feed this out of 'class'
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Post by - Mutual - »

this was pretty good
a nice comeback to Marks disss
had sum dope punches like the last one
but maybe a lil bit short the flow
was dope the multies were pretty much fire
man good read
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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MAGIC ain't on my level..sorry sir..NO TRICKS UP HERE!, so take 'battlin Smoke'...n add it to ya list of fears,
ya 'punches NOT VISIBLE', how bout a "SHOW of hands" just to make ya DISS-APPEAR,

"Dissappear Concept Has been Used So Many Times."
Same With The Trick Shit.

ur last scripture really shown the worse rhymes u've spitten, HA! i laugh at all those forced lines of rhythm,
elementary...it looked like the first time u've written, and does it really take FOUR tries to "Get Um'..."??

Ok Trying To Get Personal But Didnt, Didnt Really Have Impact Like That

u rip text? maybe when u split up ya words, cuz only time u 'get down to BUSINESS' is when u get up for work,
u seek attention kid...quick..pick up the search, the closest u'll ever get to "crossfire" is if i lit up ya church,

Cross Fire is Such a Played Concept.. & The First Line Wus Just Ass.


mark need self applaud? cuz puns not worth a flow n pace,u still hidden beneath ya idol... got no nerves to show ya face,
"We still Run This" ha u lack the VERBS to hold a race, yea i wear rags on my head..but u keep YOURS BELOW THE WAIST

Best Line In Your Verse "Yours Below The Waist", Just Sounded Funny

lil wayne fan..we know that man is a biter, too frantic n hyper.. kid u fake as hell like manikin writers,
i wonder.. is magic a fighter? never.. u panic in fires, that's y u keep losing heat like vanishing lighters


Like Vanishin Lighters Your Serious?, Come On Now.. LoL Even Lil Waynes Used Lighter Concepts...

mark's 'HAND I CAPPED' so how u manage a written?, u ain't rattlin shit..need more than a bandage to fix him,

Hand I Capped.. Forced...

faggot's stuck on AME like a spanish addiction, kid u can't START shit with KEYS like a damaged IGNITION

He Already Started Shit With Keys , Why You Replied.. Didnt Make Much Sense..


Anyways Seen you Drop Better.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

lol ^^ of course
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