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Ambiguous Realm
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

nice shyt, the hook doesn't sound much like a hook originally till u hear it repeat, but other than that the rest was pretty dope n straight forward
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yo dawg dis shit came out pretty dope nigga was waitin 4 dis u should deffo put up dat vid u did of dis lol remember when u was spittin it live shit was tight. Reminds me of da ol skoo days when i use 2 play games and shit lol
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-.HaZarD.- wrote:This Was Alright .. What The Hell Is Up With Your Chorus? Lmfao It Was Mad Corny, Your flow ok... The Punches u put out were played and just ass "pilin up like leafs" come On Now... No Real concept To This joint it seemed like U Had a few shrooms wrote a Lil went In The Studio and came Out with Some Clown Shit... Anyways Keep Droppin.


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i liked this shit i got a mario typed beat that could carry this gaming shyt on but anyway hadda nice flow brought the lyrics well so
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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