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From my up an coming mixtape
Lyrics:
Obama Became president a friend died the funeral i wasnt present an
takin another depressant an i might be high but i continue not give a crap
10 steps forwards 100 steps backs no one can not respect that check cats
are they ya friends or enemies waitin to attack the braincells u seem to lack
when i rap my minds open an the rhymes seem to stack straight up like a jack
in the box crazy like u crack aint no time to put up an act not even time to react
cus when ya trapped no fakin give time fo everyone to click clack hit dat trigger
people die cops wanna blame nigga yes i said nigga all u black rapper sayin well it figure
tryna accuse of racist when i'm not i support obama so face this or hit the pot
cus when i hit the beat thats when it hit the streets bangin on my cleets
tryna live under all this heat if it too hot please take a seat ya rhymes make a shriek
when u jus give a peak it makes poeple wish that shit would never leak
cus u could neva get a feat could put me to bed when i'm asleep n u tired of me
well me i'm hypin not write fo the sake of writin i'm right fight for the fate of fightin
not anything slight to take a life an i just might go scrape towards the light an
lightning is blindin frightnin yet guiding rhymin bout time an shit can't see
cus of this strobe lighting

i hope u all enjoy my mixtape
spread this shit around i hope there's a song
u all like


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and sumin i did a while ago thought i'd see if i could get feed
freestyle so if u want the lyrics you'll have to listen good


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inspired by K.o'sgaming shyt
Lyrics:
yo yup yup
i dunno thought i'd be random

yo i hit the door kick the road lay back spit my flo
in which u know make a sacrifice like a ritual
get ta know me call ya girl a bitch or hoe
flow so sick then go out fo more i rip ya fro
shiit
wit a flow so sick how can i even keep a hold on shit
tough i go bold on bitch snitch like u told on this
poker i fold on splits too much talkin like i rolled on skit
Quix said he had a flag in his eye respect not a fag indisguise
i drag ya demise throw a frag n blow eyes wide open downhill
slide hopin we ride dope n my flow so icey i stride frozen
i'll leave u cryin stolen cus when u defyin the old one
cus then ya left wide open
i shoot ta kill n boot da skill a junkie cus i'm poopin pills
hoopin still i root fa ill illest lyrics scoot fo real
get active no more bakin takin ages to post back fakin
talkin bout guns but ya clearly jus mistaken as i awaken
i see all ya facin me literally i may not B C D the one after E
G aint me aint no faint c cus i'm staright when my saints plea
i write A-Z amazingly thats when all the shit gets real hazy
u don't wanna go fuckin this baby while i'm tucked the AV
none of this shit gravy fat bastard tryna to act like ya not lazy
tryna be the new jay-z actin all racy rasing heart beats
my art streets ya shit sound stinky jus like when fart leaks
i dont mean to start beef aint movin up my chart heat

shit seems like i'm out
anyone want the beat get at me
although u prolly all got it tho
but well

i dont expect feed on all of'em jus
on one anyfeed will WILL be returned
thank u
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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bumpin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Kurse »

Probably aren't recieving feed because you're asking people to sit and listen to 3 tracks! Mutha fuckas are so lazy over here at times that they barely wanna sit through 1 track alone! lol

But I listened to all 3. I'm an audio-head...so even if you posted 10, at some point I'd sit and listen to all of them. lol

Didn't really find any of these real enjoyable. Mostly for the fact that free-style tracks aren't really the type of things that can truely entertain a listener unless the artist has a high-impact incredible free-style game! Even listening to mediocre free-stylers gets boring after the first track. Their "Snoozer's" pretty much.
Steer away from that.
If you're serious about puttin out a mixtape, then what you want is an album full of fresh beats (fuck all these old school commercialized beats)...written out songs that were well thought out...concepts that are either new, or old ones with a new twist and solid mixing.
You can throw a free-style track in there as an album filler, but if you try to put out a CD with a foundation of free-styles...then people aren't going to listen to the CD, their going to use it as a beer coaster instead! lol

Fuck these free's Mutual...write sumthin solid, pratice it, make sure it rides the beat, think of a dope concept or story and let me hear you drop that instead! I know you can do it. Squeeze one of them brain-children out and show me sumthin unique!

As for what you did write. DON'T say "nigger" and Obama in the same track. It won't go well for your career! lol
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thanks kurse
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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