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"but, i dont even battle no more" - K.O.'s funeral

Post by MagicMark »

pay your respects.. to the artist formally known as KO..

he fucked with the wrong dude.. and now he's left the world nothing but an ugly corpse and a lingering smell that is symbolical of his existance on this earth... to which he added nothing....

yeah.. nothing...

chea.. now this is just a lil freestyle, this is heated.. cause i dont really like the dude.. i dont want any indepth feed on this muh', just read and enjoy.. this while be written quickly and without proofin'..

lets get it...

KO.. you just a faggot an a loser
mad cause wayne got more fans than you've got pube hairs
wait... mad cause wayne got more fans than you got cells dawg
so you aint making a noise when you shaking, like the silent profile when ya cells on
really.. you aint even a joke
be like ya jaw after this.. but you aint even as broke
i got BIG CHANGE... funny... and all ya pockets slim, dummy
when he walk down the street, beggars be giving HIM money..
and if you battlin' me, it'll only end one way
so fuckin' with mags? you safer off with gun play (cheaa...)
you a no talent, no friended, ugly mother fucker
you post ya pic, you think you'd get respect?...nope.. YOU STILL AN UGLY MOTHER FUCKER
wait? ya mother wouldnt fuck ya, not from class, ya ugly, she wouldnt touch ya
you should get shot and suffer.. i'd just say what a buffoon
he cant find condomns that fit.. this dude been using water balloons
250 in a pack?.. in 1000 life times he still couldn't use em
he'd just give him to his uncle, so he dont have to clean up after he abused him
Ko claims to be reppin' the chi town? this fag just a shy clown
and couldn't game a bitch if she was tied down
and couldnt fuck a bitch if she cried "Now!!!"
why now? you ask, cause arguin' wit this dude was annoying
he couldnt put down a good case, if this dude was a lawyer
really you need to stop it, you a WEAK SOUL
he go to kurse looking for girl advice since he a WEEK OLD
they go to the clubs, kurse gettin threesomes from EACH HO!!
and Kevin at home, wanking to his sis through the KEY HOLE!!
ha, you know this all true.. so why you wanna battle for
Nigga if im a bull!! you just parapeligic matador..
what matters more?, i splatter gore fo' days
that'd 'flip KO' till his death, yeah.... O.K..
so you talking shit to me? thats a WILD DECISION...
if AMES a "body" of artists.. you their PILES CONDITION
talking bout me dawg, ya STYLE IS FICTION
keep talking behind the screen yo, i dont mind ya writtens
cause i don't mind the bitches, you know when im rippin' shots
that "k's on the end of it".. and i aint talking bout a dick or cock (wait?..)
yes i am.. if i called you out a year ago.. you'd be duckin' still
who he callin a bitch? he blow kurse off daily, for his production skills
kurse, hows his seduction skills? is his suction ill?
if you didn't smash his head against the wall he'd be suckin' still
fo'real.. and all ya tracks are average, g
this faggot "chokes" on the mic, must have a wackness allergy
you talking bout waynes "biting" but you lyin'
shit!..he sold 1,000,000 in a week.... Maybe you should try it.. haha..
that dude is making music.. why you gotta hate on him?
when you produce music, that even got the fakes yawnin'
respect the hustle, you a kid confused with hate..
What the fuck do you care about my music taste????...
you a dude who' fake, i'll fo sho' rape his hits
cause KO just a cheap man's kurse, like broke satanists
you just dont attract women, who'd fuckin' believe this geek?
only if he said he almost got a blowjob, but it got caught between her teeth
Now thats a lil freestyle.. but i can go longer
so stop talking shit bro.. really you dont wanna..
you couldnt top my worst.. still i produce like a factory
even think of firing back.. ya body got more stitches.. than a tapestry...

chea...

FUCK YOU..
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Post by Tempest »

Pretty good flow I see it was just all the things you wanted to say scribbled down. Some of your punches were a little weak but some really stood out like the beggar line, the keyhole line, dick or cock line and the last one. Pretty good diss had feeling to it man stay doing you.
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Post by K.O. »

freestyles arent typed down. oxyMORON. thats like saying jumbo shrimp retard. and you just fucked yourself go blow haz hater.
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Post by K.O. »

honestly that was horrible. im not saying that because i dont like you im saying that because you have no skills. go back to paddy wacking or whatever they call it where you're from. droppin the n bomb in your writtens again. awesome. you're the fakest internet gangsta. this doesnt do me justice when im gonna rip your face off illest in audio you bitch.
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KO.. you just a faggot an a loser
mad cause wayne got more fans than you've got pube hairs
wait... mad cause wayne got more fans than you got cells dawg
so you aint making a noise when you shaking, like the silent profile when ya cells on
really.. you aint even a joke
be like ya jaw after this.. but you aint even as broke
i got BIG CHANGE... funny... and all ya pockets slim, dummy
when he walk down the street, beggars be giving HIM money..
and if you battlin' me, it'll only end one way
so fuckin' with mags? you safer off with gun play (cheaa...)
you a no talent, no friended, ugly mother fucker
you post ya pic, you think you'd get respect?...nope.. YOU STILL AN UGLY MOTHER FUCKER
wait? ya mother wouldnt fuck ya, not from class, ya ugly, she wouldnt touch ya
you should get shot and suffer.. i'd just say what a buffoon
he cant find condomns that fit.. this dude been using water balloons
250 in a pack?.. in 1000 life times he still couldn't use em
he'd just give him to his uncle, so he dont have to clean up after he abused him
Ko claims to be reppin' the chi town? this fag just a shy clown
and couldn't game a bitch if she was tied down
and couldnt fuck a bitch if she cried "Now!!!"
why now? you ask, cause arguin' wit this dude was annoying
he couldnt put down a good case, if this dude was a lawyer
really you need to stop it, you a WEAK SOUL
he go to kurse looking for girl advice since he a WEEK OLD
they go to the clubs, kurse gettin threesomes from EACH HO!!
and Kevin at home, wanking to his sis through the KEY HOLE!!
ha, you know this all true.. so why you wanna battle for
Nigga if im a bull!! you just parapeligic matador..
what matters more?, i splatter gore fo' days
that'd 'flip KO' till his death, yeah.... O.K..
so you talking shit to me? thats a WILD DECISION...
if AMES a "body" of artists.. you their PILES CONDITION
talking bout me dawg, ya STYLE IS FICTION


This Piece OF Your Verse Had More Impact...

I Mean If you Ask Me This Was Kind of Sloppy,
The Way you Putt It Together Just Seemed Unorganized Fam
I Understand you Was Keyin Some Of It... But I Wasnt Feelin Some Of Your Set Up's .. Don't Get Me Wrong.. There Were Some Lines That Got This Dood..

Ko claims to be reppin' the chi town? this fag just a shy clown
and couldn't game a bitch if she was tied down
and couldnt fuck a bitch if she cried "Now!!!"

Lmao Word??.. You Did Um Dirty Like That...



so you talking shit to me? thats a WILD DECISION...
if AMES a "body" of artists.. you their PILES CONDITION
talking bout me dawg, ya STYLE IS FICTION


Was Feelin Ya Style Flipp In these few lines^.

they go to the clubs, kurse gettin threesomes from EACH HO!!
and Kevin at home, wanking to his sis through the KEY HOLE!!
ha, you know this all true.. so why you wanna battle for
Nigga if im a bull!! you just parapeligic matador..
what matters more?, i splatter gore fo' days
that'd 'flip KO' till his death, yeah.... O.K..



This Hurt Um... Lmfao clowned On Um N Made It Into a Real Impactin Line...

With the "O.K." Shit.. I Feel you... But You Coulda Used It Alot Nicer.
lmfao Wait i'll Show U Wud I Did 2 Da Concept Once U Hear My Track Dissin Dood..


Anyways I've Seen You Come Alot harder
But You Just Was Fuckin Around From What You said..


Keep Droppin..
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Post by - Mutual - »

had a dope flow
the punches sum were ALOT stronger than others
nice wordplay in there this was pretty good overall
so nicely done Mark
Keep'em comin
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