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The Color Green vol. 1

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Pieces of paper with little green faces on it/
Can be the difference between who's fake and honest/
Its way beyond this status and class structure/
It affects everyone from the the suits to the crack hustler/
From the lack luster to the most vibrant of types/
Thinking the quality is better if its higher in price/
Buying their lives, trying to impress us with gimics/
Obsessed with their image instead of the perfection within us/
So materialistic they become objects themselves/
Viewing life as a product to sell for profit and wealth/
Logic and health are victims of this new disease/
Consumed with greed, eyes change colors from blue to green/
Its true Ive seen the rich living check to check/
In the fast lane, greed and envy stay neck and neck/
Life is left on the back burner for purses and cars/
Its sad when they hate what you have, not the person you are/



Been a while so I thought I'd throw somethin up.
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this was pretty dope, i mean its not complex or nothin, but definitely somethin i can agree on, i was wrote a piece like this a few months back mentioning the industry with business in suits, n e ways.. overall it was nice, one of the better drops i've actually read.. didn't go off topic like most drops on here, uppin for vol. 2
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Post by Arvincible »

dope as fuck

i love the topics u bring man theyre really solid and straightforward

you had a great flow and rhymescheme man i wanna read vol 2...

keep it up ruck
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Re: The Color Green vol. 1

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Uppin to pair with vol 2 since this got slept on

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Buying their lives, trying to impress us with gimics/
Obsessed with their image instead of the perfection within us/
So materialistic they become objects themselves/
Viewing life as a product to sell for profit and wealth/


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Buying their lives, trying to impress us with gimics/
Obsessed with their image instead of the perfection within us/

I like how that flowed together this was a dope piece!
very nice topic aswell, keep writing! I think I'ma have to peep the 2nd piece!
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Re: The Color Green vol. 1

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good flow. pretty sick
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Re: The Color Green vol. 1

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Ruckus wrote:Pieces of paper with little green faces on it/
Can be the difference between who's fake and honest/

lol @ that line, good one


Its way beyond this status and class structure/
It affects everyone from the the suits to the crack hustler/

True...

From the lack luster to the most vibrant of types/
Thinking the quality is better if its higher in price/

Well, that's a fact, isn't it?

Buying their lives, trying to impress us with gimics/
Obsessed with their image instead of the perfection within us/

Great line, the highlight bar of this short piece.

So materialistic they become objects themselves/
Viewing life as a product to sell for profit and wealth/

Great one.

Logic and health are victims of this new disease/
Consumed with greed, eyes change colors from blue to green/

Killer.

Its true Ive seen the rich living check to check/
In the fast lane, greed and envy stay neck and neck/

Alright.

Life is left on the back burner for purses and cars/
Its sad when they hate what you have, not the person you are/

Probably, the second best bar of this drop.


Been a while so I thought I'd throw somethin up.

Simple and to the point. All truths, all reality. I can't fault this at all.
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