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"Murder He Wrote" Lawgix Burial...

Post by ScottJames »

OKay OKay OKay...
Lawdix Thinks text can harm him?? Pff..
Son, lemme show u why i never lose...


I CLEAVE-AND-I-MAUL This Faggot Till His BREATHIN-IS-STALLED..
Cuz No Doubt I Always Stay "Above The Law" Like "STEVEN-SEAGUL"!!
Get BEAT-IN-THIS-BRAWL.. Don't Cheat, U Aint WITTY,-SCHMUCK..
Dude Ill Put "Pressure On Ya Chest" Like Gettin "TITTY-FUCKED"!!
Leave This KITTY-BUCKED, Cuz My Brutal BARS-ATTACK-THIS-PEST..
Cuz Ill "Break-Law" Then Send Him Straight To "CARDIAC-ARREST"!!
This ReTARD-JUS-ACTS-THE-BEST..So Ill Fold Em Like TEXAS-HOLD-EM..
Im Wreckless Cuz Ill Put "Tips On His Neck" Like "CHECKIN-PULSES"!!
My TEXT-IS-MOLTEN!! Yea Im HOTTER-THEN-SPAS Plus AWESOME-AN-RAW..
N I Aint His "Real Dad" But Im Still The One Whos "FATHERIN'-LAW"!!
Hes BOTHERED-WITH-FLAWS.. But Ill Still Fuckin MURK-THIS-LAME-FAG..
Cuz My Punches'll Leave Ya "Chest Red/read" Like A "PERSONS-NAMETAG"!!
HURT-THIS-GAY-DRAG!! U The WHACKEST-BITCH Shit, Lemme CRACK-MY-WRISTS..
Cuz I Aint "Against Law" But I Still Will "PASS-A-FIST"!!(Pacifist)
SURPASS-THIS-BITCH!! Faggot U COulndt "Blow Up" If u "ACTIVATE-MINES"..
Cuz Even If U "Stuffed My Head Inna Cage" U Still Couldnt "CAPTIVATE-MINDS"!!
Hes The MASTERBATE-KIND!! To Gay Porn That Is.. So Ill DESTROY-YA-OFFENSE..
Cuz U Wouldnt See "Law-Firm" If He Fucked In A "LAWYERS-OFFICE"!!
Ur Simple-Lawgix!! Cuz U Spit PLAYED-BASIC-PUNCHES That AINT-SAYIN-NOTHIN..
I Mean Its Obvious Ur "Close To Done" Like The "SAVE-CHANGES-BUTTON"!!
This LAMES-BRAIN-IM-SCUFFIN!! While His ASSHOLE Is SADDLED-UP-ON-DICKS..
Against Me?? Pff.. "Law Wouldnt Get A Vote" If We "BATTLED-IN-CONGRESS"!!
I BAFFLE-WIT-BOMB-TEXT That'll Blow U In Circles Like EXTREME-WHEATHER-CAME..
N Shit Ill "Break Law In Broad Daylight" Like "Heists Wit CLEAN-GET-A-WAYS"!!
Im Sure Hes SEEN-BETTER-DAYS.. Im Simply The Best!! Yes, SCOTTY-KNOWS..
That I Just Embarressed You!!!! An I Didnt Even Mention Ya AUDIO!!!!!!!



^^Thats Called Rape^^
Fuck Ya Garbage Ass Audio
Bitch.

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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

liked the puns in this a lot, the whole law theme of nameplay was pretty dope, not including the last line i thought u could've been more personal bout him, and throw diverse in it too lol, least i would've.. of course i would never respond to an audio with text either.. but n e ways overall it was a solid drop
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Pretty Dope...I'll elaborate why later
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Post by Omega Bill »

Some tight creative wordplay. Nice use of multies.

Whole verse was executed nicely. Not getting in this beef, but this drop was a damn good diss.

Being a little more personal (hard to do with someone you just seen) would've killed this drop.

Good shit.
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Post by - Mutual - »

this had a dope feel to it
nice diss the punches were unique to me
other may think differnt dope lines hit hard
dope multies to flow with them lines

Get BEAT-IN-THIS-BRAWL.. Don't Cheat, U Aint WITTY,-SCHMUCK..
Dude Ill Put "Pressure On Ya Chest" Like Gettin "TITTY-FUCKED"!!

lmao
nice punch tho
keep'em comin Scott
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Dynamiq »

i thought this was decent..the law plays were expected of course but some of the wittyness could have been worded better..i felt like your punches needed more power to them but for lawgix..lol that was just enough.

anyways decent read.
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Post by ScottJames »

good looks on the feed yall..
whats wrong with responding to and audio w/ text??
jus holdin my grounds

-- Mon Aug 02, 2010 5:43 pm --

LMAO! i heart me
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