Mr. Sordo & War-Fest - West Coast Talkin'

[Devil]

Feed. We just finished this up today.
Sordo is first verse, then me.

http://limelinx.com/files/ef3e6ff5a3114 ... 5179943cff

[Sordo.]

sickkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111111111111111

[Ambiguous Realm]

figured i'd leave feedback since no one else probably will lol, both of u pretty much sound a like and flow a like, obviously i can tell the difference tho, both of u fall off flow in a few different areas, basic rhymescheme as usual, just seems like another freestyle

[Haz]

It'll Be Like Acne Once Your Face Is Attacked?....


Have You Red With Dots Like a Lady BUg?...

And You Insult Peoples Lines On Here Right....


Sordo You Were Straight, A Bit Basic , Couldnt Undastand Some Of The Shit U Said Prolly Ya Accent It's Pretty Heavy.... You Gotta Get Cha Prescense Up Wit Out a Doubt...

Warfest... You Actually Rhymed Like 1 WOrd In This Verse Good Job,
There Were Still P laces U Aint Rhyme... Lmfao U Sound Funny As Fuck When you Rap.. I Could Sorta Undastand U Though Sounds Like U Were Screamin With a Cheeseburger In ya Mouth...
Alot Of Played Or Basic Lines Delivered.

The Beat Was Straight.

[Yomommaspimp]

The beat was whack and the rhymes were garbage...Get real...positive criticism here gents the lady bug line had me rolling on the ground laughing..almost made me choke on my cigarette...you two must be related...you sound so alike its not even funny i was actually fast forwarding trying to get War's verse rolling...and all i heard was sorda...i was like wtf??? wheres Warfest?? i don't understand though...why rap about something you don't do...

"pull the gat back click clak"

I mean its just me...I never rapped about anything i don't do...its seems so fake to me...

I give u one for creativity but i don't like the track im sure i can peep out some iller shit if i snoop around some more

[Lawgix]

most deff dude... keep snoopin... u'll find some real talent on here... Illest keeps it locked!!!