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Mac · Post by **Mac** » Fri Dec 01, 2006 9:22 am

It's Hard Relieven The Pain, That I Release From The Brain,
When It Still Seems To Remain, An Seapin Deep In My Veins,
So I Started Creepin The Game, Bringin Peace To my Frame,
By Releasin The Heat I Proclaim, There's No Need For Me To Be Sane,
When You Got The Freedom To Say, What You Been Thinkin For Days,
Ever Since The Streets I Became, Hood Witted Wit A Speach To Be Made//

Just Some Ish' Went Off Tramatik's Flow..(props again)

http://illestlyrics.com/board/leave-um- ... t2297.html <--Link Since This Is my First Drop On This Thread

8th · Post by **8th** » Fri Dec 01, 2006 9:25 am

that was very similar to his. your first couple bars were kinda just his first couple re-worded. but i appreciate the link.

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Fri Dec 01, 2006 9:27 am

lmao ye we do now i think of it dude...daz krazy gud tho man nice drop keep doin ya thang homie -1-

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Fri Dec 01, 2006 9:28 am

Yeah, I Was Just Provin Somethin lol...Anyway Uh Ya Welcome?

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Fri Dec 01, 2006 9:29 am

Lol Word man, Thanks..ya Shit Was Hot To. When I Read your Drop Thought I Was Lookin In A Mirror..haha

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Fri Dec 01, 2006 9:36 am

lmfao no joke...we oughtta do a collab homie....

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Fri Dec 01, 2006 9:37 am

No Doubt Man, I'm Down. You got MSN Messenger Or Anything?

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Fri Dec 01, 2006 9:47 am

ye i got msn and AIM...my msn iz [email protected] and my aim iz KiLLaMiC88 get at me dawg 1

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Fri Dec 01, 2006 10:33 am

Uppin For Feed..

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Sat Dec 02, 2006 12:22 am

now thats the mac i remember, good shit dude, keep up the good work

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Sat Dec 02, 2006 2:53 am

Thanks Man.

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Sat Dec 02, 2006 4:18 am

tramatik did better in my opinion.. u kinda fell off towards the end of it, and yea the intro was pretty much just reworded

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Sat Dec 02, 2006 5:30 am

Hm I thought The Ending Was Better..But Ok..You Guys Just Missed The Concept Of This Whole Post....anyway Uh Thanks..

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Tue Dec 05, 2006 12:39 am

this was pretty good, solid rhyme scheme throughout nothing real creative but its straight for a short lil fuckaround piece

you should start writing with a rhyme scheme like that in battles

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Tue Dec 05, 2006 10:18 am

Word Thanks..

I Try To Use That 'Structure' In Battles, I'm Just Not That Expierenced With Battles, Text Battles At That. But I'm Tryin To Elevate. Thanks For The Feed Though.

Similar Style Huh Tramatik? lol Peep An Feed!

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