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Dead Silence
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Post by Dead Silence »

i wasnt taking offence to it
just some ppl dont read post and just just post

and to what kurse was talking about
i dont want to make ppl feel sorry for me or w.e

but here it is
when i was younger i got real bad ear infections
and when i lived over in italy when i was like 3
and my mom wanted tubes in my ear and the doctors wouldnt
because they said it would get better in time
well here to find out a couple years ago
i had a big ass hole in my ear drum
it was like the size of a dime they said (or sumtin like dat)
that happened because whenever id get swimmers ear or a bad infection in it
it ate away at my drum and fucked it all up
and one reason why ppl have speech problems is because they dont hear shit correctly
i cant pronounce R's that good because i heard it wrong
thats why i cant speak correctly
i went to the doctors last october and they said i needed surgery on it
in which i didnt think so because i could hear good outta it good imo
only difference i could tell is when i used it to listen on the phone with
and so the surgery was suppose to be an hr but before it happened they said it was worse than an 1 hr surgery so it was suppose to be a 2-3 hr one

but when i got in the O.R. it turned out to be a 5-6 hr surgery
i virtually had no ear drum they said just thin skin around the outside like a MM thick
i had to get a whole new ear drum they took out what was left of my old one
and than they took skin from my canal and put it over where it should be
and than they put the rest of my skin back in my canal

so that may answer some questions
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^^^ wow...
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Post by - Mutual - »

not much anyone can really say to that although it answered many of my questions
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Dead Silence »

It's all tru
fucked up shit

But Kurse was just telling me to do this like a couple days ago
so i did
really didnt want to
but i dc
free personals or not
i dc its only the net
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Post by K.O. »

i feel for you man. i respect that ds. i have no reason to judge nor should anybody else. and you're right its only the web.
stay up kid.
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Post by Kurse »

See...
I know alot of deaf people, and there's someone that's close to me that is legally hard of hearing...so I've had the opportunity to be in contact with various functions within the deaf community.
Some of them born that way...some of them became hard of hearing over time due to some medical reasons.

But I've watched people talk shit to D.S. tellin him to quit rap, talkin about him have a lisp...all sorts of shit. Well there's a reason behind it that the kid has no control over. And like he said...he doesn't want sympathy, but the least some people can do is atleast understand him.
He raps for fun. Becuz he likes it as a hobby. Not becuz he wants to do it for a living. But not being able to hear at the same db. level that we hear at comes to his disadvantage. hence why he may not be able to always ride the beat the way he should, or pronounce things as clearly.

Give lil homie a break. He's a good kid, an active member and has taken alot of shit when he didn't have to, let alone really deserve it. Hopefully now that he's been open and honest...assholes won't try to use that as a weak advantage.
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Post by Viral »

all i have to say...is next time..dont freestyle ur shit...lol...u were on and off beat...and lyrically it was a disaster mannnnnn!!....lol...if u woulda wrote it...i think it woulda sounded alot better...surpisingly ur mixing was better than usual...although still wiggity wack...lol....keep doin u tho man...and mutual...lol ur accent is funny wit dat deep ass voice of urs...god damn..Mr Hyde..hahha..no hate tho man...u keep doin u too...both of u should work together on some shit again...cept DS actually write this time...haha..and mutual buy a 40 dollar mic or euro's..lol watever opposed to 10...lol...overall tho...man..im not gonna rate it...wat i will do tho..is if u guys collab again...ill def leave dat one feed...haha
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

dude..i toldd u not to freestyle it lol but thats on u man,anyways my bad bout not comin thru,i do have a reason but its personal an id rather not share,but as far as the track goes..idk how to rate this man its like..u needa lot of work which u kno i mean yes uve gotten a lil better since ur first drop here ill give u that,but u reallyyy need to sit down and contemplate about everything within the song to make it good..i mean no not everyone has to,but with the stage ur at it seems it wud help u..and mutual..i suggest u do that too..hey i aint perfect or as good as kurse or anything but im confident enough to say im not bad just not great either,just keep doin u man..an about ur whole ear surgery stuff..ive been thru some shit similiar to that so i can sorta sympothize but ill save that for another day haha anyways..mutual and DS practice ur writing and delivery really put fourth emotion yall i kno u can do it,keep droppin
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Post by Dead Silence »

thanks for the feed

and tram
its okay
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Post by Subsist »

the nature of lyrics allows them to also control your flow. so "your flow sucks" doesnt have to mean "you have no sense of flow", it can also mean "your lyrics suck and theyre ruining your flow".


you should bring out the best lyrics in you so people focus more on what you're saying rather than how you're saying it.
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Post by HKX »

keep practin kid niggaz go thru shit 4 a reason shit was decent i gotta agree wit Viral tho write ur shit wasn't really feelin da free homie
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Post by Haz »

LoL Keep Droppin Guys
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Post by TreTru »

ayy i never got to comment on this..i'll say that
it was mixxed better then usual..u shoulda wrote somethin
if it was freestyle i guess it was relevent most of the time..you should learn how to do transfers in your flo changing up your vowels helps for me..
Ohh and that usher stuff was a bad idea..

I personally wouldnt have wanted a voice so deep
as the 'girlfriends voice'..but that aside
mutual your bak ups were off..your words are good
but your not really hittin your hit words at the right time..it's almost
like your writing the song without hearing the beat(if that's the case stop...)just keep practicing thats all.

anyway keep doin your thing..just step ya game up.
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Post by - Mutual - »

nah Tre they werent back ups i dont think it was an echo effect Dead put on
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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