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Here's A Clip Of An Original To Be Released Mid 20XX
This One's Called "How Long".
Tre's On The Hook And 16 Bars Of Petrafyne.

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the first song- im not a fan of those beats and hook styles but i like the song the 2 verses are cool and it has replay value.
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Tight Keep Rewindin That Shit Playa....
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i liked these songs
the beats were great both of them
the verses were dope aswell really rode the beat well
man the flow was dope an mixin was done extremely well
in both songs the second song u need ta put all dat shyt up
cus that is fire i keep playin that ish anyways
good shyt dope music keep doin what u do
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Kurse »

Really good mixtape material, both tracks! At first it was a lil hard to tell you and Tre apart, you both sound "light in voice"...but once you rifle through a few of your tracks you get used to who is who! haha

Definate good shit pimpin...I'm feelin both of these jawns! I like that Auto-Tune effect on th "How Long" joint...shit was Fiyaaaa!!!

Keep droppin that heat son!
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Mos Def Ya Know Wut Im Sayin, Nice Hearin From The General...
I'ma Drop A Track For Colab Soon, Not Sure How I'm Goin Set That Up But I'll Update This When I Do.

It's Goin Go Down Sumthin Like This,
There's Goin Be A Deadline
Quality Is A Must, You Won't Make The Final Cut If Your Using A Headset Or A Computer Mic, Phantom Power Shit Only!! (You Can Still Submit Your Track Even Though You Don't Meet That Qualification)
Spit A Sweet 16 Bars...Gotta Be On Topic, This Track Is About Problems, Or People That's Been Fuckin With You Lately (The Hook Speaks For It's Self)
My Verse Is About Me Gettin A D.U.I. And People That Fake Their Rap's (It's Kind Of Vague, But That's How I Like It)
Must Send Just A Acapella, Mix The Levels Right And I'll Do A Final Mix (You Can Add Effects But Not To Wet)
I'll Edit This When I Post The Tracks.....Stay Tuned
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Post by Kurse »

Sounds bananaz. I'm game. I've written and recorded hella tracks with a similiar concept before.
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Sound's Krazy But The Tracks Got A Layback Feel Like Your Sedated Know What I Mean...It's Posted In The Callout's Section

I'll Link You Up
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/petra ... 12421.html
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Post by Revil »

first song, you need to sound a little more presentable, its like a robotic flow you got going on. thats a hott ass hook so you gotta try and outshine that shit, you dont want the hook to make your track as an aspiring artist, you want the verses to kill it 1st and foremost.

second song... i see your a fan of beats with hooks already on it, nothin wrong with that, do what you do.
but again sounds like you need to come out a little more with your words. really feel the shit that your sayin, dont juss say it to say it... and youll be straight.

keep it movin
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Post by Petrafyne »

I Feel You I Guess...
And Fyi The Second Track Is An All Original Song, My Boy Tre Tru Made The Beat Did The Hook n He's Actually On The First Verse...
But Thanks For Your Input..

I Feel What Im'm Sayn...YOU DON'T

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