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Shut It Down ft. Salvatore & Sincere Reason

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Shut It Down ft. Salvatore & Sincere Reason

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http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7059813

didnt wanna put up a done track but o well...

First verse Me
Second Salvatore
Third Sincere Reason
Hook - Sincere, myself

Sinima on the beat.

i left feed on 3 or 4 tracks, ill post links if u want me too.





couldnt figure out the code to put the soundclick player up. any help?
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[soundclick]<div>
<a href='http://www.soundclick.com/sincerereason'>
<div></div></a>
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<param name="allowScriptAccess" value="never">
<param name="allowNetworking" value="internal">
<param name="movie" value="http://www.soundclick.com/player/V2/mp3player.swf">
<param name="loop" value="false">
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The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by - Mutual - »

to put the single widget up click full page info on the song then there is a link on that page that says get single page widget click it copy the code paste it here or where eva

the song

Hook
a bit choppy wasnt realin feelin it went to the ebat but i wasnt feelin the beat so thats prolly why

1st verse
it was good nice flow and had sum good multies n shit

2nd verse
not much i can say wasnt really feelin much of the second verse it was aiight nothin wowin

3rd verse
seemed to ahve his individual swagg unlike the rest of ya his lyrics were quite good again great flow an sum nice multies

nice song my dude jus not my type of shyt
nice try any how
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by TreTru »

the hook was crazy seemed wierd at first towards the
end but i listened to it again and it's actually pretty good.

1st verse nice flo pretty cool lyrically..nice
2nd verse alil choppy on the flow, not as strong but it was aight
3rd verse is sic lyrically lots of swag too..nice flo

i'd say this shyt was pretty hott dogg. that beat
was raw as fuck too..all in all a good ass drop..
keep doin ya thing..
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Post by Petrafyne »

Sounds Good...
Your Verse Had Some Good Lyrics Flo Was On Time..But Nothin I Really Havent Heard Before
Couldnt Hear The Hook 2 Good, Imo Pronunciation Was Bad...
Didn't Make It Pass The Hook....But It Was Alright

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Post by Lotus »

im likin this... hook aint that great, considering how nasty this instrumental is.. but ur first verse is tight.. decent punches n metas.. lol not worth the paper like a half dollar.. that orange juice line.. good shit
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