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Hata's Everywere (Made It Thru) (Feat. Devious)

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Hata's Everywere (Made It Thru) (Feat. Devious)

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[[font=Times New Roman]size=18]Problemz - Into/outro, Verse 1, Hook, & Vere 3
Devious - Verse 2

All feed is appreciated. Im always lookin to improve, so say wateva u feel homies...

~1Hundred
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Post by TreTru »

well alright...what can i say..bruh it's tight..

beat was dope..i liked it

first verse was tight good flo lyrically strong..

Hook was pretty tight i liked the concept..thankin the
haters..haha..we got a joint like that..anyway ya styles
real quik the only thing i honestly see holding the song back
is maybe some lil mixxing issues..if it's an original album..
if it's a mixx tape this shyt is fire..

second verse was lyrically correct too

3rd verse pretty much the same ..like i said your styles tight

i cant really mixx too well either that's why my homie
Petrafyne does the final mixxes..anyway dope drop man..
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i salute you
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Post by Kurse »

I gotta tell ya bruh...
...definately a solid track.
Yea, I agree with Tre about the mixing...but atleast the music is clean and clear to where you can understand it and the distortion isn't annoying...so that's a plus!
Lyrically this shit is real liquid.
Beat is mellow and smooth, definately wouldn't expect a concept such as this on it...but it's different, and I like different!
8/10
Track is swoll my nigga...keep droppin!
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Post by Problemz »

Again, i appreciate tha feedbackk yall. N 1 of my boyz told me tha same on tha mixin. I guess he was rite, i gotta not fukk wit joints wen ima lil lifted haha. But ne ways, again, im glad yall feelin my style. Im tha type dude that ya usually aims ta catch whoeva listens off guard. But ne ways, yall keep doin ya thang n expect ta b hearin more Problemz sooon.
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appreiate yall feed EVERY1 good lookin out, n expect ta b hearin more of ya boy problemz real soon!!!!
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Post by Dead Silence »

fire
no doubt
loved the chorus
everything i wanted to say has been said

keep up
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Post by SolQet »

not much ta say dat hasnt been said but dis was real hot, da hook was mah favorite part, n tha lyrics were fire. deff good drop!

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