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Haz
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[align=center]People Start Callin The MEDICS!!
Cause This A Open Callout Go Ahead SET IT!!
Bet you'll Split when Things Get HECTIC..


O Damh He's Loose Again If He Recoupes In Da Booth He'll Noose Ya Friends,
Watch I Got Proof You'll End..Do It Like Ambien When I Snooze Ya Men
You Loza's Send..Light hit's like a 'pipe fixed' ina white chick..
I Ignite Quick fuck the Hype Prick I Strike Slick N Snipe Clique's..
M-cs Are Fake With There Baggige I'm Baitin These Faggits
I Gotta 'Clear Out A Lot' Like a Vacancy Tatic, I'm A Savage
Like Relations To Macho Man , I Can Read Ya Poker Face Like I Got cho Hand
thats Why I'm Quick To Stop Yo Plan's..Don't Make A Move, Fake You'll Loze
Dood Can Take A Bruise..But I See The 'Asshole Slippin' Like He's gettin Raped wit Lube
Five In..There's No Way You Survivin..Plus Your Not Relevent So Get 'Off The Board' Like feet While your Divin!
My Bar's Are Stretched? Maybe-2-You Cause My Flow Got a Split Personality
It's Only Crazy-To-Few Till I Aim M-Eightys-At-Crew's 'Cook Um' Like Germans With EIGHTY FAT JEWS..
When I Drop mine Them Hot Lines'll Have These 'Bitches Frozen' Like LADY STATUES
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Post by K KiLLaH »

Nice multi work n finisher ur rhymescheme n flow need wor they fell off a bit tho
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Post by ScottJames »

yeaah haz, i was feelin this drop...cept for the 4 line chorus thing?? that was gay... LoL...

but mos def feelin them multis n flow in this..

You Loza's Send..Light hit's like a 'pipe fixed' ina white chick..
I Ignite Quick fuck the Hype Prick I Strike Slick N Snipe Clique's..

^^ shit reminded me of some jr writer ish...

nice
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Post by Quix »

word... ^ cosigned^


multi shit waz illy!!! it reminded me of......ummm me. LOL


shit waz Ill dog!!



It's Only Crazy-To-Few Till I Aim M-Eightys-At-Crew's 'Cook Um' Like Germans With EIGHTY FAT JEWS..
When I Drop mine Them Hot Lines'll Have These 'Bitches Frozen' Like LADY STATUES


LOL ^^ liked that ishh...along wid the shit that Scott Quoted!!

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|.R.SON.aLL.|
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

..This Was Pretty Good Fam ..
U Changin Up Yo Style i See ..
It`s a Fit Tho ..
All U Gotta Do is Polish it ..
But This Was Pretty Sick Flow Wise ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Re: Set It ..

Post by complexity »

-.HaZarD.- wrote:[align=center]People Start Callin The MEDICS!!
Cause This A Open Callout Go Ahead SET IT!!
Bet you'll Split when Things Get HECTIC..

Good opener.


O Damh He's Loose Again If He Recoupes In Da Booth He'll Noose Ya Friends,
Watch I Got Proof You'll End..Do It Like Ambien When I Snooze Ya Men

Nice punchline...

You Loza's Send..Light hit's like a 'pipe fixed' ina white chick..
I Ignite Quick fuck the Hype Prick I Strike Slick N Snipe Clique's..

Rhyming...

M-cs Are Fake With There Baggige I'm Baitin These Faggits
I Gotta 'Clear Out A Lot' Like a Vacancy Tatic, I'm A Savage
Like Relations To Macho Man , I Can Read Ya Poker Face Like I Got cho Hand
thats Why I'm Quick To Stop Yo Plan's..Don't Make A Move, Fake You'll Loze
Dood Can Take A Bruise..But I See The 'Asshole Slippin' Like He's gettin Raped wit Lube

That whole part was pretty decent, I thought the poker reference could have been stronger.

Five In..There's No Way You Survivin..Plus Your Not Relevent So Get 'Off The Board' Like feet While your Divin!
My Bar's Are Stretched? Maybe-2-You Cause My Flow Got a Split Personality
It's Only Crazy-To-Few Till I Aim M-Eightys-At-Crew's 'Cook Um' Like Germans With EIGHTY FAT JEWS..
When I Drop mine Them Hot Lines'll Have These 'Bitches Frozen' Like LADY STATUES

I didn't feel much of this, I did appreciate the split personality flow its only crazy-to-few line.[/align]
Overall, solid, 8.5/10. It kept my interest throughout.
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Post by Momeijah »

Dope Flow And Rhymescheme i Followed it All Smoothly Throughout. Couple Of Dud Punches in There And a Few Dope Ones (The 'Clear Out a Lot' Line, Poker Face Line And Split Personality Ones Stood Out The Most To Me). Overall it Was Pretty Creative And Entertaining, And ur Punches Were Set Up Very Well, it is What it is. u Gnna Be Recording This?
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