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Juicey Remix

Post by MesaR »

this is dedicated too all the people who said i was nothing,
when i was trying to paint a wall to express myself.


It was all a dream, still amazed by the hiphop scene
even as a kid, right through as a troubled teen
Tupac posters on my wall, i'd give the boys a call
Everyday friday night, get pissed until we fall
I let my paint stop, now i'm waiting for pot
smoking bongs, make sure that the chronic's chopped
way back, when i had an spray can dacked
getting high, making sure the bongs always packed
Remember hiphop dude, i never thought it could take it so far
you know who we are, we murder mc's in just one bar
now i'm in the spot light, cause my pot's tight
i'm getting paid, got the scales, weed's chopped and weighed
born sinner, making markers with ink and paint thinner
i've got the burner peices, cause my styles killer


just something abit diff.
rip biggie





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Post by GrimBlaze »

this piece was alright. flowed mostly ok structure was ok but overall a bit too repetitive, like every couple bars was either smoking bongs, choppin or weighing weed, trust me i love to blaze it but when you rhymin that much about it ya gotta have a lil more originality. and i would of enjoyed it more if the rhymescheme was a bit more technical and not just abc.
not gettin at you, just my opinion.

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Post by ugly »

too much bars about pot/weed/dro/fire ect. lol I felt the flow cuz i read this while listening to the biggie beat. It was good mane

collab?? 7/10

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"It was all a dream, still amazed by the hiphop scene
even as a kid, right through as a troubled teen"
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Post by gunpowda »

this was actually pretty good

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"Remember hiphop dude, i never thought it could take it so far
you know who we are, we murder mc's in just one bar"
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