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Remnants of the reign left niggas remained shook
Too many gangs gotcha open and now ya dame's hooked
Refrain from wasting niggas when waving pistols
Warring with weapons, wet em', remain a victim
Set it, Smith N Wesson's no sunny skies in my section
Any nigga in it for money dies a bloody death, and
Now ya hunnies crying thru it, hung up on the homicide unit
Bullets blockin' bitches, tryin to stop the snitchin
Love is lost cuz lots of niggas locked in prison
Narcs knocking neighborhoods naughty natures
Southside set strippin step back as the shotti waste ya
Laced in the finest fashions, life, I live a fast one
Fascinated by firing flaming bullets out a black gun
Tap in to the thoughts of a terrorist, tactics
In hopes of getting out the ghetto U trapped in
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Remnants of the reign left niggas remained shook
Too many gangs gotcha open and now ya dame's hooked
Refrain from wasting niggas when waving pistols
Warring with weapons, wet em', remain a victim


I liked that shit!! ^


Set it, Smith N Wesson's no sunny skies in my section
Any nigga in it for money dies a bloody death, and


came hard, but the multies choppy!

Now ya hunnies crying thru it, hung up on the homicide unit
Bullets blockin' bitches, tryin to stop the snitchin
Love is lost cuz lots of niggas locked in prison
Narcs knocking neighborhoods naughty natures
Southside set strippin step back as the shotti waste ya

Again...came hard mah nigguh...shitz grymy!!

Laced in the finest fashions, life, I live a fast one
Fascinated by firing flaming bullets out a black gun
Tap in to the thoughts of a terrorist, tactics
In hopes of getting out the ghetto U trapped in


Flow was hot here...love the last line!!



glanced at this, didn't think i'd like it....but when i read it dunny, i felt yah wut you was saying dog!!

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Gutta you soft like butta (just kiddin) let's battle!!

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Quix mah nigga thanks for the break down appreciate it homie hope u like that gangsta shit

Yuh lets battle ill holla at u soon
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this was good shyt
really felt like you was there
nice thought put into the lyrics
this wasn't the typical ghetto shyt
people firin robbin it was more
being trapped in there around that
this was very nice shyt Gutta
keep'em comin
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Post by Gutta »

its life patna, where im from, people always trying to get out so im gonna write about it, thanks for the feed tho mane i appreciate it
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