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Scriptz Pt. 1

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Imma Nickleback hard game barz sane Scriptz-In-Tact-
Little Catz showin up snub leavin Ribs-Detached--
Tommy'z-Pump rediculus tipz blown the size of a Hockey-Puck-
Aimed right will even make God-Duck--
Damage-Catz lumpz like a Camalbackz "click clack" Ransom-Scratched dudes thrown in tombstones Answer-That--
Bottles Eat-Chests then i throw couple jacksons up circle jumpin actin up and we aint even Leave-Yet-
Henny shit settle in im glidin witta Freak-Plesh slidin off the cheeks and mammii underneath bent-
Drama aint a Thing-Yet, play bad waists have a black associate, Deletes-Flesh n Bringz-Death--
If a nigga Want-War he better not mean Tom's Opps, call copz when im seen at ya Front-Door-
White nike's nice striped LV, tell me i wont Sprawl-Shotz from the pump untill he'z No-More--


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somebody jump on this with me
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Re: Scriptz Pt. 1

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Rhymescheme Was Nice But Almost Hard To Follow..
No Real Punche's Or None Of That..
But I Liked It , Once I Caught On To The Scheme..
The Flow Seemed Hott..U Gotta Deff Up Ya Lyrical Ability..
& I'll Jump On The Next One ...
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