Lil bit of freestyle ramblin

[Omega Bill]

With vanity comes insanity a calamity to the mind
Pride in excessive doses, blesses thee over time
More than rhyme, rejoice your voice thru speakers of earth
The choice is yours weither or not to speak of your worth
Seek through the dirt, find yaself buried, married to the grave
Scary to think what you gave, is varied through today
Varied through tomorrow, through the pain and the sorrow
Through the same hollow veins that swallow what you borrow
Now though, if reality is in the form of a skeleton in the flesh
Then why r my insides torn into gelatin and failing to even mesh
Skin is blue like my blood, frozen water for a heart so I can live again
Like I was chosen for slaughter n to be brought back as n amphibian
Holding my shiv again, slicing my body so I can begin to live in zen
Ill be at the hospital in ten, drs will b sedating me to sooth my seethin issues
As I dream of demons raping me, it flows n I start bleeding thru the tissues
My eyes still see me kissing you, feels like Im living jus to keep missin you
And its not that Im dissin you, if u were on fire I wouldnt even piss on you
But Ill keep siftin through the memories of you saying my pride got in the way
I aint shittin u when I say, with vanity comes insanity and thats y I sit here today

[- Mutual -]

now that was dope
the vocab was great
wasnt choppy at all
the multies an inner rhymes was crazy
this was a far greater piece than i've read
anywhere in a while
this was straight fire damm
ILLEST CLASSIC FREESTYLE
keep'em comin

[Omega Bill]

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