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Back With A Vengance

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see i mainly lack a maniac who's crazy whack an braniac
i phase u back u praise my raps comin like a nymphomanic
your zany facts are labled crap time to bring the fables back
u disable stacks which ables slack makesd me ask are y stable mack
u have to hate or abrogate got all these bastards back against
only time u comin with good lines is when u holdin coke an masturbate
u straight up like a post i got ya fate up by the throat
time to wake up like ghost in a coffin it's too late your the host
man this makes me wanna boast got me heaters on both sides
locked in mess with me then u toast man i got no time to roast
i aint holdin coke i'm golden broke marco u got the polio
man i'm on too you i'm hournered too u would think of me wannin to kill you
man i dont wannoo but i do cus it's time to settle the score
like a bidder do i aint sentimental rude i'm jus a mental dude
waitin in my hospital bed to dive out an stab the guy next too you
i aint lonely jus my chronies aint homies jus a bunch of boloni
skittles carrots foneys makes it so apparent u owe me
i whoop ya ass to much too ask that u wouldnt fuckin dissappear
how can u fuckin diss u queer u dont come up with shit i hear
i'm a pinnicle equivelance to omnipitance my elements
of intelligence tell us since u run off every time u get scared
my shyts clear it hits here cus i dont give a fuckin shyt
i rhymes shyt with shyt until they realise i'm shyt
an when i spit like shyt i'll watch jus too see who it really hits
my forces hit like militants an einstein when my rhymes
were discovered so oldschool gravity was prime time
this is my crime my dime comin from my pocket to fine lines
time to bind shine the sun to the moon there goes my spine
i'm fallin off track u can call me whack but i'll still be back
i detect hate reject protect deflect haters comments no respect
i end up wrecked on a set with a bet that i wouldnt cut my kneck
select the homies i connect up to me personally oldschool like a vet
ridin on a jet fuck no elect me for president i'm no resident
or american i'm jus tellin em i could do a better job an i'm irrelavent
man fuck a skeleton i got bodies in my closet they already paid me the deposit
then i lost it


a track i'm recordin but it could take a while til i next record so i thought i'd put the lyrics up to see what u think

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Re: Back With A Vengance

Post by eMCee Havic »

this was pretty dope could be more refined if you recording it,
you know audio wise, but i like it, its got that fast rhymin that tends to work in audio but no so well in text.

keep thee rhymes droppin hommie
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Re: Back With A Vengance

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thanks Man
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The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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