Teflon vs Magic Mark(Teflon)

[Teflon]

10 lines/5 bars
First to 3 votes no koes..Unless you win 3-0
No dickryding votes please will be discarded if you don't explain votes. Anyway you choose just explain
Check in required.


I'll start working on my verse now, whenever you check I will then drop, just don't take too long to drop want to get this battle up and voted on.

[MagicMark]

check, good luck

[Teflon]

Check I'm droppin shortly I'll edit it into this post.

-- Tue May 12, 2009 4:27 pm --

Aight here it is, goodluck homie...


Bitch please all ya punches miss, no way your making my ass fall
If you draw blood, it's my fists cut up from breakin ya glass jaw
And ya bitch aint fit for streets..Shit she should be locked away
Shes a bigger freak out in public than when they took the Whopper away!!
I'm gonna smash this wack trash, no way this whore's better
Fuck being out of his league, he's in the wrong sport all-together!
I know you're a fag kid, on a dude's lap's where ya ass'll settle
So your asshole's as wide as the gap between our talent levels...
But I'd hit your bitch easilly, so you really shouldnt've popped shit
It was like this battle, took me no effort but a pussy got
ripped!!

[MagicMark]

dude...

i know you ass, but now you already SONNED..
Not one mention of my name, could cut and paste that verse on for ANYONE!!!

never bulletproof, it looks like you devoid sense
common misconception, but teflon NEVER avoids death
(Teflon is not a bulletproof material)

you PAST old, why talk about another dudes asshole??
'cut up' so many times, now 'lawn/lon' gets his ass 'sowed'
(sow/sew)

Sig's predictin' every battle, you cant make the worst better
just look at the shit, and swap the 2nd and 3rd letter..

servin' this primate, now we observin' this silence
bitch was no showed by illbitch, she dont believe in girl on girl violence

fuck you..

[Dead Silence]

Entertainment:Mark just enjoyed his verse better

Flow:Teflon seemed easier to flow and better structured

Punches:Mark this was a close tie but that nameplay lined took it for the win

good battle both of you

if you have any problems with this vote let me know

[Teflon]

Nah it's straight 1-0 you up.

[ÐÛÇ£»]

Mark I Hope this was a free..cause this certainly wasn't a dope verse..LoL

i know you ass, but now you already SONNED..
Not one mention of my name, could cut and paste that verse on for ANYONE!!!

This didn't even throw a jab at him..all your saying is he didn't mention
your name...oh well..the flow was okay..shaky/stretched
weak opener...

never bulletproof, it looks like you devoid sense
common misconception, but teflon NEVER avoids death

Multis Kinda off...flow is dope here...and better this time around
punch was alright... it's getting better tho

you PAST old, why talk about another dudes asshole??
'cut up' so many times, now 'lawn/lon' gets his ass 'sowed'
(sow/sew)

...Nah.. Sow/Sew..can you say forced?
weak line..

Sig's predictin' every battle, you cant make the worst better
just look at the shit, and swap the 2nd and 3rd letter..

LOL ....nice..


servin' this primate, now we observin' this silence
bitch was no showed by illbitch, she dont believe in girl on girl violence

You should of put this chick
you used bitch twice...overall this was an okay line


nothin special..

overall magic..your drop was mediocre to your usual Norm In Battling..



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Bitch please all ya punches miss, no way your making my ass fall
If you draw blood, it's my fists cut up from breakin ya glass jaw

Pretty nice Punch...saying he has a frail chin doesn't really contain much sting tho
the creativity was cool/nice...overalll..smooth opener..

And ya bitch aint fit for streets..Shit she should be locked away
Shes a bigger freak out in public than when they took the Whopper away!!

LoL...nice..flow was cool..multis were off...tho..

I'm gonna smash this wack trash, no way this whore's better
Fuck being out of his league, he's in the wrong sport all-together!

LoL...Nice nice...flow is smooth and consistent..
punch was nice...creative

I know you're a fag kid, on a dude's lap's where ya ass'll settle
So your asshole's as wide as the gap between our talent levels...

LMAO....Damn...nice shit

But I'd hit your bitch easilly, so you really shouldnt've popped shit
It was like this battle, took me no effort but a pussy got Ripped

this was weak..


Overall Teflon..you're verse was pretty consistent...nice punches..overall I Really enjoyed your piece


Opener - Teflon
Punches - Teflon..His Held More Sting/Creativity/ And Consistency....And Were Worded Better At That..
Flow - Tie..Although Magic Flow Was A LIl Shaky At Points..Its Still Tied
Multis - Tie
NamePlay/WordPlay - Magic Mark
Creativity - Teflon
Closer - Magic Mark..


V/Teflon...No Hate..But I Felt teflon Kinda Swept This Battle...He's Showing Improvement..
His Lines Were Creative..His Lines Had All Of The Elements...Wordplay...Punches...Comedy(Entertainment)
Overall A Nice Polished Verse...Where Magic Mark Slacked Hoping To Get An Easy Victory...

Nice Read Overall Fellas...

[K KiLLaH]

To many errors on magic marks part....

His last punchline was in reference to muchacho man aka smoke as far as illbitch goes

The second and third letter? of whose sig? in either it doesnt make sense it changes tefs sig to now...

the ass sowed line was pretty weak too and u flipped ur opponents verse...how u gonna flip in 1 round tsk tsk

Ima have to vote teflon... AGAIN his verse wasnt personalized but he has talent with unique blind punching power and was consistent Magic Mark ur not stealing a vic away with two good punches and u went second ....shoulda came harder

[Ambiguous Realm]

2-1 teflon leads uppin for votes

[ÐÛÇ£»]

@ Killah K

In Tef Sigs It Says NWO...taking away the 2rd and 3rd letter..
Would give you Just O...aka ZERO..

but upping.

[K KiLLaH]

his wording was swap as in switch places..he didnt say swap out bt wutever battle jaygunna already im tryna see that

[MagicMark]

lol, didnt think i hadda explain that one..

swap the 2nd and 3rd letter..

his sig is N-W-O..

what happens when you swap the 2nd (W) with the 3rd letter (O)

NWO becomes - NOW or NO W, aka no wins...

and in regards to the last bar, im pretty sure illbitch no showed teflon (?) edit - na, i was wrong, teflon just commented in the battle after she didnt show..

[Ambiguous Realm]

lol ^^.. magic seemed like u keystyled this stuff up , i don't know too many people besides me that actually do that but yea it definitely was in my opinion..ur worst battle verse, i'd vote but i dont want it seemin like i'm just voting for a crew member,

just to comment on...that nwo to now or no w..well now doesn't seem like a punch.. and no w...seems incorrect.. he already won a few battles before he battled u, so that's a false statement..and if it meant like.. no wins as in hardly any..which makes more sense..still not a good pun or personal..overall i think u let this one get away

[MagicMark]

well,

lol,

thanks for the feed..

i wont comment on this until after the voting has ended, dont to sway etc..

[Teflon]

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