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[MagicMark]

pimpin' everyday cause styles a factor, been styled before n' im stylin' after
every shot ends in vile disasters, got people turnin' more heads than chiropractors
wild n' wreckless, his features is scorchin', he preachin' of flossin' about each of his fortunes
not all bling, also speakin' about leakin' em organs, every verse n' every speech is of equal importance
even deceasin' the orphans, shows his behaviour n' stealth, puttin' money his money n the sea, dudes wavin' his wealth
puttin' others backs into his work, so he's savin' his delts, till he's sicker than a paedo going back in time n' rapin' himself
ridiculous metaphors, sicker than joseph fritzls cellar door, leavin' g's slain with steel rounds
restrain these real clowns with a speech aimed that reels towns, gettin' praise of his free'z like t pain n' c brown
the way i speak's somethin', ironically, dude's retreat frontin', they really should cease comin'
leave ya deceased, dumpin' ya body in tha street, hottest on the beats, so im 'right, next to enter' the hall of fame like the delete button
pokemon like rap skills, i gottem' all, so sick with the writing, everything's precious like gollum's scrawl
i gotta ball, takin' food to the next level, im hotter, dawg, rhythms so sick, but all his haters' flow downhill like waterfalls
magic's easily the nicest, speakin' n' delightin' even his breathin' is excitin'
stealin' evenin's nightly, leavin' evils blinded, reachin' fa' lethal rhymin', believen he will find it
killin' foes till he's leavin' techs inside of haters, wreckin' minds of fakers
reflectin' rhymes fa' papers, only time magic'll fuck up, is lines about times he had sex in elevators

-- 15 May 2009 15:24 --

-- 15 May 2009 15:25 --

okay..

this was real good imo, not your usual style but still a good attempt, some multis where forced in there i,e, 'speech aimed that reels towns' doesnt make complete sense, also sex in elevators has been done before i think,

the rest was solid tho, loved the chiro punch and the rapin himself lines, there where top quality, freeze and waterfalls where good too

multis for the most part where good, 2nd last bar and 2nd bar being the stand outs,

content could have been a bit better too

overall nice work..

-- 15 May 2009 15:25 --

thanks for the feed MM

-- 15 May 2009 15:25 --

thanks for the feed MM