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K KiLLaH
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Freestyle

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Aiyo i'll run up on you pricks n re-route ya cake/
Im gettin figgas dat you niggas can't calculate/
I keep da hawk if you dare ta talk loud with hate/
Its KiLLaH cuttin up dat ass like scalpel rape/
I ball hard on da block but the scouts are jakes/
But everyones afraid ta rat cuz i stays wit da gat/
Everything i say is crack so i stay with a rap/
Like recording out in portland how im blazing da track/
matta fact i should prolly smoke haze n relax
Cuz i spaz so bad on 1st takes i collapse/
Till both of my lips chapped wit ripples n cracks/
Da flows cold bitches tryna keep they nipples intact/
I got da reaper scared tuh death ta let his sickle dispatch/
If he miss pistols'll clap n bang 6 in his back/BRRAAAAAATTTTTT
Hes gettin clapped n Im sicker than the clap/
Makin lil niggas clap everyting i pitch is crack/
Like im flippin in the trap
Last edited by K KiLLaH on Sun Jun 21, 2009 5:34 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Freestyle

Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

homie this whole thing was dope.... straight 100

u need to spit this on audio and make it longer
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Re: Freestyle

Post by ugly »

nice freestyle, but thats all cuz its only a freestyle so I cant really rate it without having to dictate sum errors. Im not gonna rate it with a 1-10

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Aiyo i'll run up on you pricks n re-route ya cake/
Im gettin figgas dat you niggas can't calculate/
I keep da hawk if you dare ta talk loud with hate/
Its KiLLaH cuttin up dat ass like scalpel rape/

hit me back with feed on my latest drop Man, Thanks
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Re: Freestyle

Post by K KiLLaH »

np fam good looks on the feed
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Re: Freestyle

Post by The Gonz »

I'm not a big fan of the whole gunplay shit, but its still a good template for freestyling and cyphering and shit. Although this wasn't too complex, I thought it was pretty nice. Had good flow and I could totally feel it over a nice beat. Kinda reminded me of Jada. I agree though, throw it down on some audio, make it longer, you'll have a nice little street banger.
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