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Thinkin....(FEED!!!!!!!)

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Im thinkin lifes to short there aint no reason to hide shit/
those who cant see this got there whole perspective covered in blindness/
im just bein honest i couldn't fall at my highest/
i aint just droppin rhymes the bottom line's i dare any battle rapper to try this/
cause im not just an average local voice with lyricism/
they aint got no choice and i can hear it in em'/
today and age aint about to slay a page all thats most important/
is to just coast and flaunt shit forget respect and those that taught it/
this drop is for those who still raise there glass and toast to want it/
the feelin in your chest somethin like a thousand bullets/
ive been in the game for years yes enduldgment at its fullest/
always keepin my gaurds up using strong forces/
tramplin obsticles then walkin tall threw long courses/
the mics my own planet i'll be damned if im sworn off it/
this is real so some readin will call it all awkward/
cause since ive been alive theres no need to lie/
ive been keepin speakers by my side and they aint leavin mine/
same like the mic heres some slight reasons why..
when i do this not to leave you with a weak or a decent vibe/
i dig deep reach inside and leak some lines/
that'll open the most certain unbelievers eyes/
havin most be surprised when theres beef besides/
to see this guy standin half ya size highly amplified/
droppin shit that'll make clicks stick to classified/
and wont stop till the grasp is mine quik wit the chance to climb/
leavin most to roast next to steppin stones/
once i threatin zones makin contenders surrender without the sencors blown/
fearless never swingin with a clear fist i defend my own/
out for all to hear this severe shit dont be left to roam/
i'll never forget all the practice and devotion/
do to that im estactic knowin that my statis is Ferocious/
Last edited by ReCkinAll on Fri Jun 05, 2009 12:19 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by The Gonz »

This shit was pretty nice. The flow was a little choppy in places, but you had some slick multies in there. Some of them were very smooth. I like some of the messages too. Keep doing yer thing man, I'd like to see some deeper material from you.
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^^Good look man...

Lets get some more feed
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Post by eMCee Havic »

when you got to the shorter lines i was feelin it at a lot more, the flow was on it. deep thinkin i like the concept, deeper than most drops here, more my style of rhyming.. good drop homie
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feed!!!! shit.....
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Post by Momeijah »

This Was Pretty Sweet, a Lot Of Parts Had a Nas Kinda Vibe To Them. First Line Grabbed My Attention And Kept Me Reading, Lot Of Perspective in This Drop. i Thought For a Sec u Were Gnna Go Off On a Tangent About Hiphop Being Dead Etc Which is a Tired Subject These Days But im Glad u Just Touched On it And Used it as a Transition To The Next Part Of ur Verse. i Think ur Multis Were Pretty Slick And ur Flow Stayed Together Nicely Even Though it Would Switch at Parts, So Good Job. Keep Droppin.
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