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Omega Bill
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Short little diss

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No hate towards anyone, just trying to get back into attacking/dissing. I literally just picked names out of the Scrips nd Callout section and haven't actually talked to or know in any way anyone I mentioned. Besides Gutta, because the kids a faggot.

I aint seen nobody whacker, these slackers all dead
Talkin rich swagger jackers but using crackers for bread
Dont regret I said, looking for greatness but my visions failin me
Fuck with me and Ill leave ya broke and shook like Guttas family!
Speakin of Gutta, you ever want that rematch bitch just set a date
Cuz I salivate at a win, n even the new dudes r tellin u to elevate!
Loving all the wiggers actin tough n spittin mean like Celph-made
All kno u culdnt be rough round the edges if u were made wit Cel-Shade!
Hearin the sirens cuz this a red alert, an evac of all the raps with whack shits
And the only thing quick about Quix is his premie ejac on his lovers sack n bits!
Kahluas a sack of shit, dudes gay as fuck pretendin like he likes to lick pink
But yo shit stink, and I aint takin u seriously when u named after a bitch drink!
I sought out to kill, and I thought that I will, I have n you keep dying, man
N im shitin on ya cuz only thing bought from "Teflon" were fuckin fryin pans!


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Re: Short little diss

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This was alright, alittle to short and not that complex but like you said your just tryin to get back into things, decent drop tho....

you can drop feed in my "Thinkin" thread in scriptures....
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Re: Short little diss

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YEah man that shit was off the hook! I hope some niggahs snap back so I can see you wen ya really in action.
Da only line I didnt like was the last wun.

Hook up sum feed in my "Faker..." Thread I could use the info to develop sum.
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K KiLLaH
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Re: Short little diss

Post by K KiLLaH »

lol i think ur punch on quix was too stretched n wordy every other punch was decent i think ur ready for the battle grounds and a battle with u a teflon might give you a good workout or an L if ur not careful lol

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