KiLLaH da spaz-a-HaLLiK

[K KiLLaH]

Aiyo my scrollz been da best bitch, Im something majestic/
I explode when i text hits, composing the deafest/
Niggas know that im restless, devoted n wreckless/
Im that growth in ya chestess arose from asbestos/
Sick flowz on my strepshit, my mentals turrets quipped/
Fuck those pussy bitch, faggot ass lickers u rep wit/
You shouldnt flow to agress this my blows'll erect pricks/
Cuz Im golden wit da gloves like da glow of ya necklace/
Puns the greatest, underrated, but when noticed i wreck shit/
Got the critics gettin off like the roads ta ya exits/
Ill sun you, rip ya solar like im folding ya plexus/
RUN ICHABOD!! n keep ya head n shoulders connected/
EARLY!! im WIRED UP, drinking folgers for breakfast/
Ya garbage, da type ta get disposed when contested/
Rip ya wit real talk yeah exposures the method/
Battle me, N ya stuck wit lose or choke for electives/
Rhymes dope,like a needle laced wit coke or that eX shit/
Lines quotes, preaching sickness like the pope was infected/
nines tote, set tekkin till i smoke em ta pestless
Dikes choke, cuz im swimmin in the throats of them sexists/
You can never supress this, my vigor is raw/
I'll bring the shots to you niggas till ya liver is flawed/
I gotcha shorty moving out tryna live in my draws/
Kiss her goodbye, graze the hint of my balls/
I dont be thinkin at all, my flows drop blowing up my own spot/
Still, my muuzicks been twice the crack like cloned rocks/
Livin up ta known props, in battles i own ocks/
So Skadaddle or get rattled n saddled by dome shots/

haha KiLLaH!!

[eMCee Havic]

EARLY!! im WIRED UP, drinking folgers for breakfast/
Ya garbage, da type ta get disposed when contested/
^^^
that shit was dope there

Aiyo my scrollz been da best bitch, Im something majestic/
I explode when i text hits, composing the deafest/
Niggas know that im restless, devoted n wreckless/
Im that growth in ya chestess arose from asbestos/

your opener was sick man, went off on some shit for real


i liked this piece kinda fell off in the end wasnt as hard as the begining. but still dope, i'll give it an 8.0, shit was elevated

good drop homie

[ReCkinAll]

im feelin that...

nice drop killah....

[Phasewon]

this shit was illllll, a couple forced multies here and there, but that's what's gon' happen when your rhyme scheme is so complex and dope, flow was on point, multies was on point, overall some sick ass shit.

[K KiLLaH]

Thnx FAM I'll make the next one better UP lol

[complexity]

"Aiyo my scrollz been da best bitch, Im something majestic/
I explode when i text hits, composing the deafest/
Niggas know that im restless, devoted n wreckless/
Im that growth in ya chestess arose from asbestos/"

That was on some black thought shit right there.

I thought doing that one rhyme scheme for so long with a few switches was pretty dope. It takes some concentration to do that, I appreciate the work.

When you are that dope, becareful about ruining your pieces with horrible lines, take them out, no matter what or reword.

"You shouldnt flow to agress this my blows'll erect pricks/
Cuz Im golden wit da gloves like da glow of ya necklace/"

The inner rhymes were cool, but I'd rather just see that first line removed or reworded.

[Haz]

Aiyo my scrollz been da best bitch, Im something majestic/
I explode when i text hits, composing the deafest/
Niggas know that im restless, devoted n wreckless/
Im that growth in ya chestess arose from asbestos/
Sick flowz on my strepshit, my mentals turrets quipped/
Fuck those pussy bitch, faggot ass lickers u rep wit/
You shouldnt flow to agress this my blows'll erect pricks/
Cuz Im golden wit da gloves like da glow of ya necklace/
Puns the greatest, underrated, but when noticed i wreck shit/
Got the critics gettin off like the roads ta ya exits/
Ill sun you, rip ya solar like im folding ya plexus/

Maybe In Like a Line U Kinda Didnt String It Together Right..
But .. Multi's Was Nice , N For a Kind Of Free Piece In a Sense U Kept a Purpose N Didnt just Jump around In a Sense...

Exits < Not Crazy Complex But Just made Me Smile 4 Some Reason LoL
Sometime's When U Write With Inner Rhymes Then The End Rhymes U Could Really Fuck ya Flow Up When Your goin To Spit it .. But When It's Read Out It Seems Good..

RUN ICHABOD!! n keep ya head n shoulders connected/
EARLY!! im WIRED UP, drinking folgers for breakfast/
Ya garbage, da type ta get disposed when contested/
Rip ya wit real talk yeah exposures the method/

Duller .. Middle But Seem's Like Your Goin 4 A Build Up ..

Battle me, N ya stuck wit lose or choke for electives/
Rhymes dope,like a needle laced wit coke or that eX shit/
Lines quotes, preaching sickness like the pope was infected/
nines tote, set tekkin till i smoke em ta pestless

Word .. See U Were Goin For More Of a Build Up .. The Only Thing About The Punch Type Shits U Spit Was Their Kind Of Played .. I Liked The Pope Line ..


Dikes choke, cuz im swimmin in the throats of them sexists/
You can never supress this, my vigor is raw/

Alright @ The Sexists.. I See The Build Up ..

I'll bring the shots to you niggas till ya liver is flawed/
I gotcha shorty moving out tryna live in my draws/

Lmfao Funny Shit ..

Kiss her goodbye, graze the hint of my balls/
I dont be thinkin at all, my flows drop blowing up my own spot/

Word Up .. Blowin Up My Own Spot Could Have 2 Meanins .. Know Ur From C.T...

Still, my muuzicks been twice the crack like cloned rocks/

Lmao Cloned Rocks .. Shits Funny...

Livin up ta known props, in battles i own ocks/

Own Ock's < -- That's a No No Killah!!..

So Skadaddle or get rattled n saddled by dome shots/


Word Up .. Like The Endin Line .. It Just Deads The Piece..


Anyways Homie .. I Liked The Rhyme Schemes U Kept Up .. Some Cool Ass Play's In This Piece , Some On The Basic Line But Still Fit Nice.. U Stringed The Piece Together Pretty Nice.. The OCKS< Thing Needs 2 Go My Nigg.. Anyways it Was a Good Read My Dood Keep It Up...

[Momeijah]

Do u Listen To Rakim ? The Whole Verse Was Really Similar To His Style (Consistent With it Too), Props.

i Was Really Feeling The Multis And Flow On This, Strongest Point Of The Verse. Punchlines Hit For The Most Part But Some Looked Like They Were Thrown in For Rhyming's Sake:

Rhymes dope,like a needle laced wit coke or that eX shit/
Lines quotes, preaching sickness like the pope was infected/

i Mean They Weren't Terrible Or Anything, Just Meh Lol.

Ill sun you, rip ya solar like im folding ya plexus/ <-- Loved That. ill Wordplays in There.

Ya garbage, da type ta get disposed when contested/ <-- Funny.

i Enjoyed This Drop Quite a Bit Man, Not Sure if ive Ever Read Any Of ur Shit Before, Memory's a Bit Hazy. But Good Shit Keep at it.