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Da Rockwilder

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a verse im writting to the instrumental- "DA rockwilder" by Method man and redman

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3vxAGoVW22o
^^^ heres the beat, the flow starts when the beat kick, at 48 seconds

yo
yo

it's me, comin back with the music
i move it, like i was hydraulic fluid
pressures in my movements
winning and losing, i'm cruising
for bottles of booze an only 2 cents
whoes in? to burn this institution
and during the confusion, that’s ensuing
contributing, to a brand new solution
a nuisance to a true sense, whose tense?
i'm M to the D, with some whole new print
im too sick,
leavin um crippled, cuz i move too quick
deducing, that i'm a, luna-tic
who connects the stress, but stays, so fresh
unless i'm pressed to press the next subject
an test the rest of ya intellect, so complex
i stretch and flex, head an neck..
an firin off with rhymes, like old school vet
so def my depth it set deeper than any trench
hence, i have, one and only adversary
me, myself an i, with dab of the imaginary
and an infinite vocabulary, I have it barely
got it from a magic fairy the, baddest daring
any one… to step in my way
my weapons array will have you stress n dismayed
electric wit sprays an this is your lesson today
confess an jus pray that the tension ll sway


another audio im workin on
Last edited by eMCee Havic on Fri Jun 05, 2009 12:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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hard ta rate let me know when u put it on wax
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k, still uppin
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It sounds good...

it'll be a nice piece when its done....

nice
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uppin for some real feed, i have no means of recordin right now
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I'll have official feed for ya when you come back....
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Post by Phasewon »

this shit was on point, not as dope as some of your previous joints, so I know you can come harder, multies was lackin' a lil bit, but in that same aspect, it makes it iller to know you can switch your style up, and do some different shit, which is one of the keys to being a complete MC, so in that token, this shit was dope, stay up.
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Post by - Mutual - »

sounds real nice
could flow quite well on the beat
mayne this is nice shyt
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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