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Mutual The Paradox - New Track

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yeah


Hook
I'm Mutual
Paradox
They Cant Figure me out
(haha)
I'm Mutual
Got Lyrics
That They Cant Figure Out
(haha)

Verse 1
man its return of the sublimanal brainbox master of minds
leavin the disasters behind fast to the shine last on a fine
past on a dime all the way thru school crashed upon a find
i can rap mashed in on the grind ghetto rollin trashed over a line
i'll keep whoopin ya ass an over time i'll pass out of my rhymes
slash into ya spines remix my words til i'm gassed drownin in slime
mayne givin out this hate i jus fix it upon my plate an take my fate
if we didnt do that we'd be out the gates of heaven haters disgrace
the name of rap i jus laugh an wait i'll be back too great
for you to handle off the mantle from a picture my face
comes flyin to the truth like cream into a scoop an rap into a booth
i got u crappin wile i'm aloof hidin up on the roof
mayne lyin thru to ya tooth letloose the final truth
remain hated cus i'm too uncouth sneakin an stay sleuth

Hook

Verse 2
see what u choosin if u losin to jump into the confusion
n provin that if u cruisin that u movin to the illusion
intrusion is exclusion converted over to a simple groovin
inclusion to all you haters booin mayne errbody stop snoozin
fate in my state is stated as late to the plate wait
like barry bonds weight built up from the roids great
nah no hard work done cheat dont need a beat to beat
ya ass into the concrete an my fleets come runnin in cleets
to stomp ya ass into the street an then laugh when under heat
from the police please we jus pull out the cheese
they get off our backs ease is more of what we need
i'm back to the basics u get ya face split u still cant face this
a racist is better than u an he black/back of the races(OoOoOhh)
man i aint got the dope u aint gotta hope i aint dealin coke
wanna clean verse then eat this soap hang with me get a metal rope
we cant settle jokes i'm too hot for the kitchen i got the kettle broke

Hook

Verse 3
this shyt is way too easy i know the game to cheesy
man all u lames is sleezy an they played like weezy
how could u even mess with me i got this shyt on lock that i know
but see u freestyle like a turtle cus words jus movin slow
my freestyles are too advanced by chance u came out with sumin not spammed
in errbodies mind like a bad song u fail but thats when we hail
the power to the people like lou forigno was all the males
mayne prepare to panic hidin up in ya attic a rap addict
actin ashmatic breathin hard movin slow like car traffic
mayne it's massive i always stay behind the mic call me janet
damm my pun went up in smoke like cigars jus a bad habit
Mutual decidin if ure funeral tomorrow or the day after
dont bve so skeptical i kept it cool squeeze all you heard was laughter



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aye i thought i aint put anythin up ina while so i'd put this up
here's the beat if u want it that is

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7639887
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Re: Mutual The Paradox - New Track

Post by Phasewon »

this shit was dumb ill, props for actually having a hook and three verses in actual song format, I can recognize that it takes more work and skill involved to actually write a complete track as opposed to one half assed verse, the lyrics were above average as well, the quotables lacked a lil bit, but just the way the shit was structured made it dope, I know it would sound sick over a beat, flow was def on point, stay droppin' that hot shit.
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Re: Mutual The Paradox - New Track

Post by eMCee Havic »

yeah i agree with phase on that shit.. props for sure.. the structure was great, flow was on point. shit wasnt to complex but that doesnt really subtract any thing from the piece. definately a good audio piece, would work well over a beat.. uppin to hear you put it into audio
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Re: Mutual The Paradox - New Track

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aye i'll be puttin it up on Saturday thanks fo the feed
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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