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K KiLLaH
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Live from the chat *edited*

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Lookin round the board n since theres a couple a new jacks
Ima spit flow ta let em know that the truths back
1st couple bars ill have them askin whose dat
I'll even bump in white hoods like a fux wit dem klux cats
its about to be a war n if you ask where my troops at
ima one man army where the fuck is da booth at
cuz most dudes wack so most of these crews slack
Rolls deep but cant script it nowhere close ta true rap
Yeah you might move-trap posted in ya new slacks
With a shorty gettin open cuz you holdz a few stacks
The fast moneyz fast life boast n get ya khuf clapped
Or the coppas gonna lock ya till ya throw ya dues back
But honestly... ta police.. i feel no1 owes shit
you shouldnt rot for dope bricks in a cot cuz you sold piff
So the lesson was... dont get caught or gloat bitch
N don't spit if ya immune unable ta flow sick

16z mothafukkas in 5 minutes lets get it
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Re: Live from the chat *edited*

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decent for a freestyle in the chatbox.

your definitly good at maintainin the rhyme will still making sense.you had a couple of nice lines in there too
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Re: Live from the chat *edited*

Post by insTRUmental »

on point playa ..
flow neva fell ... multis ..
wheneva i read, i envision it bein flowed ..
this would go hard on tha mic ...

like you said, "ima one man army where the fuck is da booth at" ..

you pulled it off, fa sho'

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Re: Live from the chat *edited*

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good look fam you anyfeed u2 leave is mos def respected
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Re: Live from the chat *edited*

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Im feelin that shit killah......

nice drop
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Re: Live from the chat *edited*

Post by eMCee Havic »

yeah those chat cyphers allways seem to flow hard..

my favorite was that one man army line shit was dope
multis were on point, an overall good flow..

keep um coming dogg
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Re: Live from the chat *edited*

Post by Haz »

Maintained The Scheme & Flow, Cool for a Key.
Keep dropping
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