Portapotty Origami

[The Gonz]

Ruckus is back, like a section of vertebrae/
Thought you slit my neck but all you left was a surface scrape/
If I heard you say that yer verse left a herb decayed/
Its safe to guess that I'm double checkin the murder rate/
Cuz some cats are blessed, but less than a third are great/
I'm destined to burn and slay til there's none left to impersonate/
Its a curse in ways, never drew a plan to be the sickest/
So when I spit to yall, its like Superman givin speeding tickets/
My frees are wicked, my writtens flowin with rage/
Surround you with solid bars like you were thrown in a cage/
Known for exposin you fakes like I opened the drapes/
I serve hot rhymes, read The Waiters, yer just holdin some plates/
The dopest display, expect nothing less from an artist/
Leave the coldest ablaze, cats check for resin to harvest/
Reflect on the carnage, somebody check for a pulse/
We all share the same hobby but mine has better results/

-- Fri Jun 26, 2009 11:48 am --

Cmon yall, quit sleeping on The Scriptures! There's more to hip-hop than text battles!

[$harky]

Once again your multis held the flow together well.
Alot of witty punches

liked this shit...

My frees are wicked, my writtens flowin with rage/
Surround you with solid bars like you were thrown in a cage/
Known for exposin you fakes like I opened the drapes/
I serve hot rhymes, read The Waiters, yer just holdin some plates/

ILL drop, keep up the pace.

[EvilJoey]

Nice bro
Gots ur poetic Flow / nice lil jabs in there... Great starting line too.

1

[K KiLLaH]

uppin for the public i'll leave feed later

[Def-init]

Ayo, that was tight as hell bro. Nice work. I love the wordplay used in this piece. Keep'em coming Ruck.

[Phasewon]

ill shit, as always, multies, flow, punches, everything
is on point, you already know...

"Cuz some cats are blessed, but less than a third are great/
I'm destined to burn and slay til there's none left to impersonate/"

^just one of the many sick lines in this shit, dope verse.

[-MenaCe-]

Nice drop Ruckus....

9/10

[- Mutual -]

mayne this is dope stuff i gotta say i loved the flow the multies was fire i gotta say man this is the best piece i've read from yah but that maybe cus i dont read alot in the scriptures jus every now an again