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Where I Stand #7

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This is the final where i stand.
Featuring Subsist.
Subsist = Red

Where I Stand #7 - ImMortal Or ImMoral?

lock this place in quickly the clock is racing
plex in-sist we spit what you are not embracing
they block the station all across the nation
if you question Jesus as a false equation
the oscillation believed by most the population
contradicts itself in its own documentation
Im watching the nation building false information
the formation of all creations, begin evolving with time
see being a racist was never a problem of mine
you ask yourself could hatred be dissolved in the wine
that you drink every Sunday maybe its all just a sign
like Scientology, is really the blind following the blind
even theologically problems being solved by the shrine
is psychologically declined, and then illogically we find
what seems divine, then let it crawl in the mind
the dreams we hide, they are so appalling inside!

Your Living Possessed
Zombies Each Breath
Waiting For Death, Zombies
Walking Up The Cathedral Steps
Switch From Complex To Subsist
Walking Up The Cathedral Steps
Subsist Purifying The Evil Text

looked upon with hate , theyre like your a muslim
if we're so fake why do the jews want jerusalem
im praying for gods forgiveness and theyre like whos him
you can act ignorant but eventually truth wins
some worshipped rappers , but see where shakur went
islams the path to heaven , quraans the blueprint
cant no one ever stop me from putting in my two cent
always tryna show you it no matter how translucent
imagine a world with no religion people not thinking
everyone getting layed at home weed , pot and drinking
life's easier that way but where would society go?
would we then expect havoc and chaos? highly so
u wanna listen to satan theres no one stopping you
but we'll be watchin you in hell god dropping you
into the great holy fire your skin turning black
and you're screaming in pain wishin you could go back
giving apologies to every single person you've hurt
every person you swore at , hit , and ripped his shirt
and vomit every single drop of alcohol youve drank
and layed down drunk , useless to the world ,mind blank
just got your paycheck , so many sins you're craving to do
you've got so much money ever wonder who gave it to you?
that would be god , make use of all the chances he is giving
and its never too late to be straight cause god is forgiving


Your Living Possessed
Zombies Each Breath
Waiting For Death, Zombies
Walking Up The Cathederal Steps
Switch From Subsist To Complex
Walking Up The Cathederal Steps
Who Will Get The Needle Next?

yo, give me a weapon we will arm the legend
we taking the rap profession to armageddon
inside the lesson of the scripture I have written
is wisdom that goes beyond predictions of convictions
past the contradictions that puts restrictions on victims
its the song that's sickened by all these depictions
missing visions of decisions made before you were living
as a teen I lived in contradiction as a Christian
let my mind free now it seems god might finally listen
I'm not a slave ripping pages to find existence
I don't give a fuck about you, just mind your business
let this rhyme combine with a design intertwined with physics
Im twisted you can see that from a distance
i hear you talk shit, doesn't mean I have a sixth sense
the ignorance that you display everyday
is sickening I'm trying to live life a better way
and that's without gambling my life away
i don't stay up late at night ta pray
because either way the next morning ill see the light a day
redemption is something i have the right to pay
the highest payment, fuck your biased statement
your following the tracks of the driest pavement
I'm a great maven in this safe haven that's straight fakin
shake satan when i make facin him, take in less concentration


Your Living Possessed
Zombies Each Breath
Waiting For Death, Zombies
Walking Up The Cathedral Steps
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subsist that shit was deeper then the grand canyon.. liked alot, even though i aint religious or somethin.. nice flow

some worshipped rappers , but see where shakur went
islams the path to heaven , quraans the blueprint

my favourite;)


complex, not the best i've seen from u, cause i know u can do so got daaamn good, but shit was damn tight! made an impression as always! especially i liked the start of verse 1... ill flow!
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forgot to leave a rating.. i'll give it 9/10
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thanks
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Post by 8th »

cant no one ever stop me from putting in my two cent

^except the dictators that run the middle east. LOL

sorry, i only read subsits verse. Ill read it all and drop real feed later.
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Post by drunken jesus »

complexs verses were good, subsists was mediocre in some parts but hes improving
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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