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Lyrical Magic

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Dippin in my bag-of-tricks
hopin theres magic that-exists
i snag-a-bit laugh and blast-a-spit
with the passion of an activist
and after-this i craft n form-a-feat
emassing powers from the stormin-seas
performin-deeds that you sworn-ya-seen
but everyone has failed at recordin-me
cuz i was born-ta-be a thorn-in-knees
adorned-wit-speach n the slight-of-hand
now you see it now but in sight-i-can
hide-a-plan execute n delite-the-stands
bow and pause with a mic-in-hand
slice-my-hand then POOF gone-in-smoke
the crowd-ll-choke chantin bombin-boasts
but on-tha-road i'm flowin to common-folks
sippin whiskey and tossin-jokes
no option-closed i walk on in the doors
surpise bitches!!
now tell me nothings POS-SI-BLE

ha ha ha just a topical key

uppin for feed
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Post by MOEstradamus »

nice little drop you got but your multis seem to be off you do this alot heres something you can do to help get them to match do this to help break them down so you can get them matched up do this when writing them break them down by sylabuls

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kil-ler see that helps you count them so they match up better but wen you type them take it out so its thriller and killer hope that helps
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u dont have to use syllables when rappin. its how you say shit, your swag... well anyways still uppin
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Post by MOEstradamus »

ya in audio dats tru but in txt its best to match dem cuz da way you say it might not be the same way other people say it im givin you a tip for your battles cuz u lose multi cats for that but yea i know wat you mean but in txt if you say sumtin one way i might say it a different way and it can totally throw it off
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yeah homie, but all text should transmit to an audio feel, if your an emcee.. shits always audio man
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