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Order:Kully,LawGix,Mac(ME) lol.. With LawGix On The Hook..
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all had problems with the mic blowing. first verse needs some flow fixing , chorus was pretty cool , the rest of the verses had fine flow and the last last verse the volume was a bit lower than the rest of the verses so kinda went outta song balance. overall this was good just fix the mic blowing.
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Get a pop filter goddamn
I Replaced Faith Where The Screws Tap Into The Bible I Was At The Recital They Asked Whos That In A Midst Of All This New Rap I Was Bangin Beats With Jesus Behind The Hay Stacks So Try To Stay Laid Back Cuz The Way I Face Rap Is Readin The Scripture Nobody Can Replace That
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Post by Street Pharmacist »

...wtf fix up the volumes all i hear is mumbles, but the chorus is good.
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Post by drunken jesus »

chorus was pretty good, wasn't really feeling any of the verses though
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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