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Haz
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Still Goin In..

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Good Weed Hype's Me Up So You Can't Rest Me With Fire
I Hold The Title Since The Two Best Textcee's Retired..
Everyone On This Board Got Me Bored To The Point I'm Off
Smoking Joint's Of Moss & Gettin Drunk Off Arv's Soy Sauce
i Roll With a Evil Set N Aint Spit On Enough People Yet
I'ma Lethal Vet, That 16 Can Get U Hit Wit Bars..She Aint Legal Yet!..
You Wiesel's Step But Are Plain Terrible Like The Miesel's Rep..
Why You Hungry For a Whoopin Like i Aint Feed You Yet??
i'll Kill The Force Thats "Milkin You" Like Murderin See Thru Breasts!..
You Writer's .. Take Ya One Hand & Stick With it, While i Rip Critic's
Different Style's Like P's Changed Up Get ya Brain Tuck'd Unda ya Dame's Nuts
Lame Fuck!..Your 'No 1' Like A Dime, Rewrite Ya Rhyme's You The Type Ta Find
Nothin At The End Of A Road..This is Friendship Coke Cus i Got The Tighest Lines
You've Never Struggled Scrub..You Can't "Take The Pain" Like Muscle Rub..
You'll Never Make a Hit Man.. Have ya Writ's Can'd..
N Then " Kill Ya Self" Like Fuck A HITMAN..
Old Time's Got Chu In Vain Like U Never Took Off That Wrist Band With A Big Hand
N Little Hand That Move's Like SWift Fan's..I'm Quick Ta Tornado N Ripp Stan's
Like a Quick Scam Provided To You By Eminem And FIF Damn..This Is a Mix'd Land
So Who Say's My Punches Can't Land In The Mix Of My Damaging Script..
What Chu Supplyin? Arv U Dyin Slowly "Give It Up" Like Sacrifices By The Myin's
That's Literal Go Ahead U Liberal Throw Shit In The Sky Like God's Mystikal
My Lyrical Pistol's Full Like The Choopacadra i'll Ripp ya Bull..
The Dumb Fucka Is Wack He Suck's At This Crap..What The Fuck Is FLOW TA TEXT? "ENOUGH OF THE CAT!"..
Like Acting In Winter i Got Cold Scripts..i Can Give U a "Mean..Six Teen" Like Who SCOTT ROLL'D WITH!!
Back Ta The Scheduled Program..I'ma "Iron Champ" Like I 'Metal Pro's Man'..
I Laugh Every Foe's Plan..Incests The Only Time They "Eva Blow Fam"
You Don't Want Any "Part Of Me" i Got Fucked Up Artarie's..
I Spark Da Tree's Till My Insides Look Like Dark Debree..
Take That As a WARNIN BRO! My Tip's Are Stingin Like Hornits Swarmin Yo..
If U Think Ur Trash Then U Can Be WARM IN SNOW
The Way i Cast These Line's Im "Bound Ta Catchin Somethin" Like Porn Stars That Perform In Hoes.. Woah!!..
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The Gonz
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Re: Still Goin In..

Post by The Gonz »

Flow was good. Multies were nice. Punches were mediocre in my eyes, a couple stand outs. This is good but I've seen you drop better. Other than the multies, I actually found this somewhat boring. Just the same shit you always drop. Mix it up next time, try something different. This generic battle shit is growing stale.
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Re: Still Goin In..

Post by -MenaCe- »

Im Feelin This....

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Re: Still Goin In..

Post by Def-init »

Been awhile since I have read anything by yeah Haz.

"Good Weed Hype's Me Up So You Can't Rest Me With Fire
I Hold The Title Since The Two Best Textcee's Retired..
Everyone On This Board Got Me Bored To The Point I'm Off
Smoking Joint's Of Moss & Gettin Drunk Off Arv's Soy Sauce
i Roll With a Evil Set N Aint Spit On Enough People Yet
I'ma Lethal Vet, That 16 Can Get U Hit Wit Bars..She Aint Legal Yet!..
You Wiesel's Step But Are Plain Terrible Like The Miesel's Rep..
Why You Hungry For a Whoopin Like i Aint Feed You Yet??"

That was pretty dope though.
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Re: Still Goin In..

Post by Phasewon »

nice shit, kinda on some strictly "text" shit with the textcee
and forum talk, but nonetheless, shit is still on point
for what it was, solid ass joint, stay elevating.
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Re: Still Goin In..

Post by Brah-Vo »

Ahhh haz still killin it
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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Re: Still Goin In..

Post by complexity »

That was some dope ish.

"You Don't Want Any "Part Of Me" i Got Fucked Up Artarie's..
I Spark Da Tree's Till My Insides Look Like Dark Debrees"
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