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Sym/Ghost Diss

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Ghost Diss


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Yo, you defying the beef, if you a ghost nigga who you tryna be?
Stylin with free’s and driving with ease, man, own a car but can’t ride a beat, fam?
Dammmn, how does it look? Couldn’t see my lines if I gave you the book,
Wouldn’t be surprised when I give you the hook-
That you tremble in disguise when I’m eyein’ the cook,
Yeah Sym, ya’ schemes shit, it’s bored, made up like that achievement award!
And there’s no way that I’m duckin lame,
Got Sym’s/Sims life played out like the fuckin game
I fight back to this chode toucher,
How you gunna fight back to the Ghost Buster? Haha
And I hate to be mean,
Heard your gay so you didn’t make the marines…



Done this right now. Stop droppin disses on niggas and I wont have to bud in.
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really?
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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haha...wow..i cant hear this cuz im at work but..the script looks str8 i'm dying to hear ya the delivery and the beat on diss...cuz ya damn avatar makes me crack up i picture a lil pink snail on a rampage with a damn gohstbusters jumpsuit...haha.. i'll edit this post with my real feed though...1
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ur names is lungz cuz u be good at holdin your breath while your blowin me!!!
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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call me out. EVERYONE in here can drop a line on which diss is better though.

-- Sun Jul 05, 2009 12:55 pm --

BTW the whole shit was personals, didnt make the marines (gays not aloud), got a life time achievement award here, and the list goes on.

-- Sun Jul 05, 2009 1:32 pm --

lmao my ten minute write and record is better then eberything youve done, lmao...
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Post by Kurse »

No hate...

...but when it comes to "disses" ...this shit was hot garbage.
Real talk my nigga. Come hard or don't come at all.
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and you read his to right?
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u cant read mine dumbass it was a freestyle!
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lmao^^^
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LunGzZ wrote:and you read his to right?
LMFAOOOOO
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lmao, listened to, whatever.
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haha...well i heard worse in the forum...

it should've been longer..but what you got's decent i aint gonna hate...

uumm..i would've gave it more action quality's gotta up but other than that..you dont punches are cool but bring a lil more
carnage in the next one..cuz looks likie this aint the last you'll have to drop....1
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delivery needs work flow was pretty solid, lyrically it wasn't bad but for a short lil diss i expected more there were no knockout punches just some aight lines, overall i'd say you're probably just as good audio-wise as ghost you just need to work on your delivery and drop a solid track at him
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Thanks^
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^ sup big shot wheres my diss at????
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