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HaZarD Vs LunGzZ (Hazard 3-0)

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HaZarD Vs LunGzZ (Hazard 3-0)

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4-1 TKO, 3-0 KO or First to five otherwise.

No bullshit, No Dick Riding...Don't recycle...Don't bite...



Due Thursday 12am...


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-- Tue Jun 30, 2009 4:20 am --

haven't even checked yet?
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Re: HaZarD Vs LunGzZ (4 Bars)

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Re: HaZarD Vs LunGzZ (4 Bars)

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HaZarD

Theres a line you don’t cross with me and this fag bordered it...
LunGzZ Slice you up whether it’s bone or skin until I got this Mod/Maud dying faster then Homer did! WHATT!!!!(1)

Uno I rock a pair high. You had a hundred battles dude, that’s a rare sign!!!
But hey, judging by your post count, it looks like you got a lot of spare time…lawl…(2)

When I’m bringing the gats up, this fag will turn back, run, or offer a backrub
And lets be real, I’ll have U Ko’d/UK oh’d like English citizens singing their anthem!(3)

I’m hasty with options! I’m sicker then rabies involved in a ladies concoction
Ya lines? Save me the vomit! Caz I got Hazard put to rest like fucking safety precautions! RIP(4)



Don't understand anything then feel free to ask, or don't vote.


-- Fri Jul 03, 2009 2:48 am --

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Re: HaZarD Vs LunGzZ (4 Bars)

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I'm Rippin ya Like Therapists I'ma Open Ya Up..The People'll Watch This Dood LunGzz Collapse Like He's Smokin 2 Much
He's Writin a Plee..i'm Fightin With Eaze Snipin Da Flee His girl Don't Suck So She Say's "Lung Can Sir" Like The Disease
Lungz Maid A Bitch Like He's Making Her Sweep! Like Butcher Organizations Your "Shaking Fer Meat"
U Shoulda Pulled Out Like Takin A Leak..i'ma 'Drive You 2 Death' N Then Have You Reshaped In a Seat
Your Trash Might Make The Bin..U Dared The Devil So Get Hell Fa Stunts
We Know you'll Fake The Win So i'll Make Sure U Literally Have That "L IN FRONT"
This Battle's Been OVER STAN Since You Were "Beggin For a Whoop-In" Like GOLDBERG FANS!
I'm Killin Son..He's Skillin None So Posin As Tobacco Reps Is The Only Way People FILLIN LUNGZ
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Re: HaZarD Vs LunGzZ (4 Bars)

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Appreciate any votes we can get ;)
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Re: HaZarD Vs LunGzZ (4 Bars)

Post by MOEstradamus »

lungzzhazard

opener-hazard with the cancer line and da smoking line was a good opener... lungzz yours was good just not enough
multis-hazard used more imo but lunggz the last multi you had was tight
word/nameplay-Hazard that lung can sir line was sick
personals-lungzz since nameplay got its own all name punches our outa this one so ill give it to the weaker mod line

flow-TIE
structure-lungzz his structure is way better than yours becuz hazard it seemed like you kinda put a punch with a punch and made 2 bars one...
closer-lungzz i felt his was stronger becuz hazard yours seemed a little played i always hear the ___ only way thier fillin/feeling ____ coulda done better here

came out a tie so ill add

enjoyment-hazards was funnier but both were good so hazard gets it
creativity-hazards lung can sir line i still think was good as fuck

final 6-4

This was a good battle to read lungzz came hard but it just wasnt enough even tho hazards bars could be questioned as each a bar but until something is changed im sticking with this good battle but my vote goes to

HAZARD
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Re: HaZarD Vs LunGzZ (4 Bars)

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LunGzZ:

Theres a line you don’t cross with me and this fag bordered it...
LunGzZ Slice you up whether it’s bone or skin until I got this Mod/Maud dying faster then Homer did! WHATT!!!!(1)
-OK Opener 5/10

Uno I rock a pair high. You had a hundred battles dude, that’s a rare sign!!!
But hey, judging by your post count, it looks like you got a lot of spare time…lawl…(2)
-Again Just Ok 5/10

When I’m bringing the gats up, this fag will turn back, run, or offer a backrub…
And lets be real, I’ll have U Ko’d/UK oh’d like English citizens singing their anthem!(3)
-Na 3/10

I’m hasty with options! I’m sicker then rabies involved in a ladies concoction…
Ya lines? Save me the vomit! Caz I got Hazard put to rest like fucking safety precautions! RIP(4)
-Nice Closer 8/10

Overall I felt that LunGzZ could have came harder then he did his wordplay and creativity really did show in this one and the punches just barely hit, not bad just not the greatest verse ive seen from ya.....

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Haz:

I'm Rippin ya Like Therapists I'ma Open Ya Up..The People'll Watch This Dood LunGzz Collapse Like He's Smokin 2 Much
-Ok Opener 6/10
He's Writin a Plee..i'm Fightin With Eaze Snipin Da Flee His girl Don't Suck So She Say's "Lung Can Sir" Like The Disease
-ok 6/10
Lungz Maid A Bitch Like He's Making Her Sweep! Like Butcher Organizations Your "Shaking Fer Meat"
U Shoulda Pulled Out Like Takin A Leak..i'ma 'Drive You 2 Death' N Then Have You Reshaped In a Seat
-Decent 7/10
Your Trash Might Make The Bin..U Dared The Devil So Get Hell Fa Stunts
We Know you'll Fake The Win So i'll Make Sure U Literally Have That "L IN FRONT"
-Decent nothin special 6/10
This Battle's Been OVER STAN Since You Were "Beggin For a Whoop-In" Like GOLDBERG FANS!
-Na 3/10
I'm Killin Son..He's Skillin None So Posin As Tobacco Reps Is The Only Way People FILLIN LUNGZ
-Decent Closer 8/10

Overall Haz came alittle weak in this one also but his verse was alittle more consistant and the lines got my attention alittle more then lungzZ did and of course the Punches and multi's were there also......
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The OutCome:

Punches-Haz(Barely)
Multi's-Haz
Creativity-Neither
Consistancy-Haz
NamePlay-Tie
Personals-Tie
Flow-LunGzZ


V/Hazard



(Votes Needed In MenaCe vs M.O.E)

-- Mon Jul 06, 2009 4:50 pm --

Bump! Its 2-0 Haz
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Re: HaZarD Vs LunGzZ (4 Bars)

Post by eMCee Havic »

punches- haz
personals- haz
creativity- haz
flow- Lungz
multis- tie
enjoyment- haz


Overall vote- Hazard

.i think this was an alright battle, but haz came way harder than lungz did compared to his other battles. haz was consistantly hittin lungz and lungz didnt really have any nameplay/personals except for the end

so that 3-0 K.O sombody close this shit
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Re: HaZarD Vs LunGzZ (4 Bars)

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