MenaCe vs -6BoNeS0- (MenaCe 3-0)

[-MenaCe-]

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G'luck!!





Listen!!

Your no competion just another victom imma Send Home..
Stretch BoNeS have em rest in pieces wit his weak shit on his Head Stone!..

I seen ya change ya avy up cause you cant create enuff Bruce Lee Anger..
This Loose Leaf Gangsta is gonna FALL FAST like a True Sea Anchor!..

In with the Cops and Possible Feds by now i know my shit done Got To His Head..
Kickin his monitor is the only way he Stompin On Threads gettin shit on more then Hospital Beds!..

And its just a rap battle so dont take It Personal..
Im juss gonna make so not a single person'll say they Heard Of you!!..

[BennyBones]

break dancing with cb is the only way u can make bones stretch/
put the crome to ya dome leave it bobbin like karen thai-necks/

e-mail it out on the i-phone and paste it on a v.i.b.e. pic/
reminding u whos the best at murderin cats on illest-lyrics/

throw a granade in ya mouth and turn ya face into a land field/
this fictional charater still belives in sky droppin anvils/

and.. i will, always be remembered like an young jeezy ad-live/
man chill, nothins more personal then the ad that ya last filled/

"thai-neck stretching"-
http://www.ask.com/bar?q=karen+thai+nec ... ngneck.htm

"nothins more personal then the ad that ya last filled"
dateing adds

i had a better verse but it got erased tryin to add this link lol like wtf dammit.......but yea ne ways get at me bldddao!!!!

[-MenaCe-]

Good Ish..

Uppin!

[MOEstradamus]

menace
Your no competion just another victom imma Send Home..
Stretch BoNeS have em rest in pieces wit his weak shit on his Head Stone!..
ok nice opener decent punch nice flow 3/5
I seen ya change ya avy up cause you cant create enuff Bruce Lee Anger..
This Loose Leaf Gangsta is gonna FALL FAST like a True Sea Anchor!..
lol nice punch i liked it 4/5
In with the Cops and Possible Feds by now i know my shit done Got To His Head..
Kickin his monitor is the only way he Stompin On Threads gettin shit on more then Hospital Beds!..
lol another nice punch but didn't run together 3/5
And its just a rap battle so dont take It Personal..
Im juss gonna make so not a single person'll say they Heard Of you!!..
i didn't feel this one at all weak punch to me and didnt flow good 2/5
total12/20
good battle man u had some hot shit in here but i wasnt feelin the last bar

bones
break dancing with cb is the only way u can make bones stretch/
put the crome to ya dome leave it bobbin like karen thai-necks/
ok ok ok idk but isn't that considered flippin idk if its aloud but o well da punch was nice tho 3/5
e-mail it out on the i-phone and paste it on a v.i.b.e. pic/
reminding u whos the best at murderin cats on illest-lyrics/
ok you just hyped ur self up here 1/5
throw a granade in ya mouth and turn ya face into a land field/
this fictional charater still belives in sky droppin anvils/
multis and flow good but not feelin da punch much 3/5
and.. i will, always be remembered like an young jeezy ad-live/
man chill, nothins more personal then the ad that ya last filled/
lol nice lil punch and personal i guess 3/5
total 10/20
yo man this was a closer battle then i thought bones you stepped up i think if you woulda spit dis in ur last battle you woulda beat sceritz but menace has a bit more xperince then you good battle from both of you

but menace edged it out by 2 points my vote

menace

[-MenaCe-]

1-0 Uppin!

[K KiLLaH]

Bones Your Gettin Better But Dayum Menace Came Harder Than I Ever Seen Him Cme Personals And All Cat Sweep MenaCe cept flow that was a tie


Your no competion just another victom imma Send Home..
Stretch BoNeS have em rest in pieces wit his weak shit on his Head Stone!..

I seen ya change ya avy up cause you cant create enuff Bruce Lee Anger..
This Loose Leaf Gangsta is gonna FALL FAST like a True Sea Anchor!..



^^ even though this battle was short that was amazing multi work and excelent delivery i think you found ur style not to mention the personal thrown in the 1st punch good shit my nigga

[eMCee Havic]

yeah ^ i agree

cat sweep by menace cept flow

Bones ya improving. but menace came harder

vote- menace

[K KiLLaH]

3-0 KO -Closed n UpDated-