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Def-init
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Dark World

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Lightning,
looking like artillery shells falling.
Caressing landscape at a warlords calling.
Cooling ashes, cellular memories flashing.
I'm hating on Catholics,
they supported the Nazi Regime!
No reason for logic,
in this philosopher's dream!
I hate liars, hate the Vatican throne
There 'biggest hat' spends his life alone
Love, a consumer’s loan! Also known as...
an overblown and emotional zone.
Hope I don't meet the 'sticks and stone'!
I'm a tombstone, crumbling in the danger zone.
A jackal in the capital of Sierra Leone.
A scent of gloom and cologne, costumes of bone,
Unknown moans, baby booms and a new bishop's throne.
I look for opposition, wishing I can deaden a sinner!
But the only comparison I found, was in my mirror!
No direction or affection in life. Christ,
I've thought of talking to the next telemarketer
about relationship advise.
An epileptic flash of Septic flesh on greener pastures,
Is the only attitude that seems to matter!
A crude pattern in my method of madness,
is to splatter grey matter
over a minor league's first at batter.
A tremor changing my demeanor.
I'm more bad then blurs in answers
when anger is allowed to enter.
A hammer to a hamster, bodies in a harbor
hunger to a leaper,
the liquor contained in scripture.
I'm the hatchet, in a hitchhiker’s pocket!
A picture, around mother’s necklace locket.
The whispering whimper of the 9-5 worker.
An undiagnosed tumor in the summer of Sulphur.
A roofer losing his footing, rhyming in rapture.
I hope I'm there, at the end, in the year...
"When Hannah Montana turns into Britney Spears"
A time when Hannibal is real and cannibals use spears.
a life that’s shallow, legendary devils!
Coke, kids and scandal, during pagan rituals.
- If I can't bend Heaven, I shall move Hell. -
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Re: Dark World

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Lightning,
looking like artillery shells falling.
Caressing landscape at a warlords calling.
Cooling ashes, cellular memories flashing.
I'm hating on Catholics,
they supported the Nazi Regime!
No reason for logic,
in this philosopher's dream!

Started Off Nice...Poetic Feel..

hate liars, hate the Vatican throne
There 'biggest hat' spends his life alone
Love, a consumer’s loan! Also known as...
an overblown and emotional zone.

Just Doesnt Fit To Me...

A jackal in the capital of Sierra Leone.
A scent of gloom and cologne, costumes of bone,
Unknown moans, baby booms and a new bishop's throne.

Shit Flows So Raw...


look for opposition, wishing I can deaden a sinner!
But the only comparison I found, was in my mirror!
No direction or affection in life. Christ,
I've thought of talking to the next telemarketer
about relationship advise.

The Telemarketer Shit should Get thrown. you Should Replace That Line LoL

An epileptic flash of Septic flesh on greener pastures,
Is the only attitude that seems to matter!
A crude pattern in my method of madness,
is to splatter grey matter
over a minor league's first at batter.

Wasnt Feeling This..


A tremor changing my demeanor.
I'm more bad then blurs in answers
when anger is allowed to enter.
A hammer to a hamster, bodies in a harbor
hunger to a leaper,
the liquor contained in scripture.

Could Tighten this Up

I'm the hatchet, in a hitchhiker’s pocket!
A picture, around mother’s necklace locket.
The whispering whimper of the 9-5 worker.
An undiagnosed tumor in the summer of Sulphur.
A roofer losing his footing, rhyming in rapture.
I hope I'm there, at the end, in the year...
"When Hannah Montana turns into Britney Spears"
A time when Hannibal is real and cannibals use spears.
a life that’s shallow, legendary devils!
Coke, kids and scandal, during pagan rituals.

This Was just Entertainin To Me.. Pretty ill..

Last line Didnt Rhyme With Anythin LoL


Anyways Overall This Was a Pretty Good Drop.. You Kept Me Entertained..
Your Concept Was Straight..Your Def a Decent Writer.Everyone has Room for Improvement...

I Liked The Little Poetic Touch To it LoL

Anyways Good shit Keep Droppin
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