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JHaze
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Cant Leave Rap Alone

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This is my pen n this is my mic,
ayo this is my life, its my mission my fight
i kick it, rip it n flip it, when i spit it im nice
i murk these jerks ull never hurt me its the truth
im raw n delerious, its eddie murphy in the booth
they some sore losers, and they already been fucked
ima knock off ya jaw now try to keep ya chin up
im runnin and gunnin, comin for every last possesion
so grab ya weapons or u best to ask for blessins
cuz if not urine trouble except no tract infection
take on ya whole crew n bet im still whippin some ass
ill leave em all smoked like an empty cigarette pack
i got permission to smack, any kid spiittin his rap
if he never lived it or did it its more fiction than fact
but its a waste yall wack, after ya face all scratched
ill make u run them diamonds like some baseball laps



an ace in this place, im releasin this hard shit
no pace in this race, u breath n u lost it
fags findin christmas presents so deep in the closet
but no Xs and Os, im the best wit my flows
when im flex my aggression its like a weapon exposed
damn i need a microscope just to check on these hoes
offendin me please, ill make a mess of my foes
they gotta jump straight up just to step on my toes
dismiss em holy shit you still livin u lucky
i feel like moby dick n im swimmin wit guppies
theyre all the same, just anotha fake hustla
the state of hip hop? im the muthafuckin governor
theyre shit is garbage, i bring voilence thats clear
you comin wit a worse record than the lions last year
bitch ur a fake n an actor its a waste to come at ya
ill just throw a g on ya head like u playd for the packers
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Re: Cant Leave Rap Alone

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This is my pen n this is my mic,
ayo this is my life, its my mission my fight
i kick it, rip it n flip it, when i spit it im nice
i murk these jerks ull never hurt me its the truth
im raw n delerious, its eddie murphy in the booth


LMFAO!... Insane Rawness... Flow Was Bananaz..


they some sore losers, and they already been fucked
ima knock off ya jaw now try to keep ya chin up
im runnin and gunnin, comin for every last possesion
so grab ya weapons or u best to ask for blessins
cuz if not urine trouble except no tract infection

The Urine concepts Been used.. But it Still Came Out Raw...
Multis & Flow Were On fire ..

take on ya whole crew n bet im still whippin some ass
ill leave em all smoked like an empty cigarette pack

Played...


i got permission to smack, any kid spiittin his rap
if he never lived it or did it its more fiction than fact
but its a waste yall wack, after ya face all scratched
ill make u run them diamonds like some baseball laps

Raaaaaaaaaaawness....



an ace in this place, im releasin this hard shit
no pace in this race, u breath n u lost it
fags findin christmas presents so deep in the closet
but no Xs and Os, im the best wit my flows
when im flex my aggression its like a weapon exposed
damn i need a microscope just to check on these hoes
offendin me please, ill make a mess of my foes
they gotta jump straight up just to step on my toes
dismiss em holy shit you still livin u lucky
i feel like moby dick n im swimmin wit guppies


Sick Shit...



theyre all the same, just anotha fake hustla
the state of hip hop? im the muthafuckin governor
theyre shit is garbage, i bring voilence thats clear
you comin wit a worse record than the lions last year
bitch ur a fake n an actor its a waste to come at ya
ill just throw a g on ya head like u playd for the packers


,,, Cool But Wasnt Consistent With The Rest Of The Peace
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Re: Cant Leave Rap Alone

Post by -TraMaTiK- »

i liked ur 2nd verse more,stood out to me more. ur flow was consistent thru out ur piece it seemed an ur multi's arent bad either. idk if uve done audio yet or not i gotta check,id like to hear this recorded if it isnt already
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Re: Cant Leave Rap Alone

Post by -MenaCe- »

Nice drop for the most part.
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