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the IL Take Over/ 8th and Ghost

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[{GHOST}]
It aint a Whisper From The Scriptures to written cyphers about Pictures,
Put an 8th of whits witta pinch of Ghost in the Mixture, an you gotta Flow that Spits-Pure,
Its Critical to Learn from It, check the facts from the Illest News to Tournaments,
Its simple were supa lyrical, you wouldnt spit fresh flames if you Burned a Mint,
This is a Restricted Area, cut off yuh air supply Constrict yuh Barriers,
A masked america, in mass hysteria, I predict if our spits Conflict- Ill Bury Yuh,
I sit in the Creation Chamber, wit distilled concepts I rip Tapes in Anger,
Don't Mistake the Danger, playin games cuz we lyrically Shank like Gangstas,
Check on the status in The Chill, mixin static wit practice improving On Skills,
Typin in Cyphers showin our Will, to be the illest wit Evil Elevation InStilled,
Jus watched for who the Awards are Givin To, I got the Kurse jus read the InterViews,
Its depends on who you Listen To on Hip Hop News, Chick or Dude we'll Shit on You,
The take over strays from the Mc of the Month, smoking flows like Weed ina Blunt,
Its not Bleek we bring Heat like the Sun, so Peep it, its Done you've Seen it Enuff,

[{8TH}]
sub standard bastards leads to some stand of action,
a takeover that could break hova, no opinion: thats facts-son..
no compassion...we push lames to the side, make u dames decide,
we're from the side where pleasure endeavors and fame reside..
we are the illest of lyricist, that you feelin while we diminish-kids,
immortal type flow engorging the mic bro..bet we gone finish-this..
this kindred-shit...theres no blockin roads, we step over the top of u hoes,
battles or top-i-cals will embarrass parents of you cocky-foes..
dont drop your flows...prewrite so we might, consider respecting you,
G's fights cant override these mics..so even 'gangstas' susceptible..
you aren't acceptable...elevate or die & kids celebrate our lives,
the level of fight develops with time and will separate your spines!..
no messin with mine...cold in all aspects and rollin over ur fag-shit,
motorola type aspects that'll have you mullin over this like ads kid..
this is an ad-lib...im a hundred percent better you punks is just bed wetters,
you in a funk & im just fresher..im a winner, cause i was just bred better....


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Post by drunken jesus »

this was a nice piece both verses were wrote well 8ths seemed to deviate from the topic a lil but it was nice regardless
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Subsist »

yeah this was really cool. its such an encouraging piece and full of hype for the site.
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

both verse were illl as fuck keep droppin -1-
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-=TraMaTiK=- wrote:both verse were illl as fuck keep droppin -1-
Agreed, Shit Was hot Yo'.
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Post by complexity »

Ghosts was extremely creative. The word association with Illest Lyrics made it ill. Probably the most creative piece I've seen you do. The flow was also great. The multis etc.

8th. Had nice wordplay. The first line was like DAMN. 8th also had very good vocabulary, which seems to be something to expect in most of his pieces, so i won't acknowledge that to many more times.

Can't get to much better of a read for 16 bars. Very interesting collab. One of the better ones on the site. 9.5/10 on the Illest Lyrics scale

The only real reservation I have about this collab. Is lack of complete clarity of direction. Though from what I assume, its more of a 8TH AND GHOST IN THE HOUSE. Type of theme. And telling people this is whats up. Which is cool enough.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

it was ok.. ghost had some decent multis.. 8th had the vocab... nothing amazing but not bad for a collab between the two of u
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Post by 8th »

appreciate the feed from all
The only real reservation I have about this collab. Is lack of complete clarity of direction. Though from what I assume, its more of a 8TH AND GHOST IN THE HOUSE. Type of theme.
yeah your kinda right. It was the takeover, but we kinda both went in a little different directions, but i think we both just tackled the subject in a different way.

ghost, your shit was good. and i agree with complex, VERY creative how you incorporated the forums and other aspects of illest into your verse. good stuff.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

mad love shown for this one, i thought the shit was hot, 2 diff artist eit 2 diff point of veiws and 2 diff skills wit the key pad, joinin forces to create art. dude like i told you 8th your shit was hott, and thanx to all that commented and left feed back, and to further anyones opinion this was notta diss on illestlyrics, jus to clear it up, thanx and the drops will continue comin from the both of us
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